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Another writing down some ideas.
Antha's parents; this time i want to focus on Esha, Antha's mother.
She would have similar looks as Antha or more realistically Antha would look more like Esha.
I haven't thought about her.
Maybe she would be the side character that looks like main character in Irvan's writings, i mean like this;
Irvan is writing some stuff to his book. He sees Esha come and gives a soft smile. His mind goes 'she looks amazing in that dress'
I mean now we are seeing from Irvan point of view of Esha since, he will be writing about Esha and that will be only known information on Esha. So when i will write ideas even if its for just Esha. They have to be from Irvan point of view so lets go like this then.
(that just made me realize we can never know how Esha is without Iran beacuse in eyes of Irvan, Ehsa is a godess. We need a 3rd point of view in this.
Maybe Granparents, (?) no that would go way back; and i want family tree to look like its starting from Esha and Irvan.
Maybe it doesnt need to be a person, maybe it can be like.
QuoteIrvan could hear the old ladies in the balcony talk about them, when they were passing by. They weren't speaking about Esha as Irvan saw it. Words like "Is that Esha...that crackhead girl in woods." their looking down on his love made his stomach get sick. Old ladies saying 'She is not smart or talented.' Irvan thought 'how could they not see' when they got a bit far, his thoughts changed. Focusing on new things.
Here we see about Esha without using Esha but still Irvan perspective commenting on a more realistic 3rd person talk about Esha.
I try to make characters like give from one side and get from another like;
Irvan is smart but not handsome
Esha isn't smart but pretty
which in whole complete and even eachother.
Antha in other hand is a mess but kind.
I like this way because its easy to devolop instead of just dumping trauma on the character; sure there is sad parts but also more packed background like Antha didnt had biological parents but a great adoptive parents.
[This is all my ideas for now]
have a great day!!
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Antha has no idea about the information as the Book of Irvan location is unknown.
So this not related to IRP at all unless someone decids to you know xd want to dig deep down at this simp's book.
I was thinking do a secret family stuff if it ever makes it into irp. My wishes it doesnt, because it would ruin Antha whole mental system. As She already had a breakdown from the second information she ever learned about her parents, which was their death and decided she wants to leave it at there about biological family mystery.
I am glad to hear as long as its not IRP i can write whatever i want lol.
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