Pandasan

Thanks for using my moon pool ;-;

I agree completely with him! This section of the lore really caught my attention - probably because I'm a hexing freak, but whatever! Anyway, the most a witchdoctor's curse could probably extend is a week! And that's with OOC consent! A regular curse is about a day-to-two days, depending on your tier. I am against the cursing section because, like, Evocress mentioned, there are already two (maybe three because mysticism?) wonderful magics that can already curse. Not to mention, they have a wide variety of curses to cast. You even mentioned that it is similar to soul puppetry cursing... which is... meh. If you want cursing and necromancy, just become a soul puppeteer and a necromancer. No need to add that on to this rewrite when you've got some good magics right already in place! (Also, your cursing is very powerful... like super powerful... wow) Bottom line, I agree with Evocress a lot! As a suggestion to help you with this piece? I have nothing, but Evocress' amends look decent!

It was a nice, small piece to read! Some avatars, I dislike because they need work; however, others are neat-o. Anyway! Personally, I would like to see more done with the current avatars before considering adding more. Should more avatars - specifically these - wish to be added, some revision should be considered!

Great lore! I love it +1

Pretty!

I agree. It shouldn't entirely make you infertile. Just make it more difficult to produce offspring since that is what the Curse is.

Interesting video. However, I still do not agree with complete infertility. Especially with half-breeds in the past who have mated and produced offspring. Infertility should only be applied with the Elven curse.

I do not agree with this at all. Can you give a more in-depth explanation as to why they should- or are- infertile? Otherwise, the other clarifications are good.

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