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Cornivore

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Application Comments posted by Cornivore

  1. Changed Status to Under Review

    1yPM0YR.png You are almost there but you could use some help.

    1. Your interesting facts to be like one to three words, I would request you take a look at them and make them into sentences. 
    2.  your skin looks like it has bunny ears because of the white and pink stuff, I would request you please find one that is more lore friendly, and is easier to tell what it actually is.
    3. Your biography is nice it just seems short and copy and pasted. I would request you go back and add more to it. If you need help here is the wiki. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw https://imgur.com/jAPlD7R

  2. Changed Status to Under Review

    1yPM0YR.png You are almost there but you could use some help.

    1. The first thing is your metagame definition its not quite there, I would request you look at the forums and make it a little better. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
    2. Your interesting facts seems like you are trying to powergame before you even start the server I would request you change the first one up, and then change the one about knowing magic, because you cannot start out on the server knowing magic, you must learn it in game.
    3. Your biography actually contains none of the servers lore, I would request you please take a look through the wiki and add some of the servers lore to it. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw https://imgur.com/jAPlD7R 

  3. Changed Status to Under Review

    1yPM0YR.png You are almost there but you could use some help.

    1. Your metagame definition is a little bit on the wrong side I would request if you please make an edit to it. Here is the wiki for help. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw https://imgur.com/jAPlD7R 

  4. Changed Status to Under Review

    1yPM0YR.png You are almost there but can use some help.

    1. The first thing is your metagame and powergame definition could use a little bit of help. I think you should take a look at the wiki and apply that knowledge to your application. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
    2. Your biography actually has none of the servers lore on it. I would request you take a look at the wiki and add some of the servers lore. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
    3. your interesting facts are just one word I would request you take a look at them and make them into sentences.

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few  changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw https://imgur.com/jAPlD7R

  5. letoGzw.png You can re apply now, just please use what I have asked you to fix, I know we talked in messages but it will be easier for me to deny you so another member can help you with your next application. 

    If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord:  https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw https://imgur.com/jAPlD7R

  6. Changed Status to Under Review

    1yPM0YR.png You are almost there but you could use some help. 

     

    1. The first thing I notice is that your biography has none of the servers lore. So I would request you take a look at it, and then go into and edit it using some of the servers lore. if you need help here is the wiki https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

     

     

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw https://imgur.com/jAPlD7R 

  7. Changed Status to Under Review

    1yPM0YR.png You are almost there but you could use some help.

    1. Your metagame definition is not quite there I would request you please fix it.
    2. Your Biography has this magical axe, you cannot actually start with a magical item when you begin, you have to find that in game, so I would request you take a chance to make it a regular axe.
    3. Your skin is also not lore friendly, I would request you take a look and find a new one. If you need help here is an old skin thread. https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/161821-the-lotc-skin-archive/

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw https://imgur.com/jAPlD7R 

     

     

  8. Changed Status to Under Review

    letoGzw.png This is obviously a troll, if you would actually like to apply, please look at what you need to do. Then in twenty-four hours make a new application. Please go ahead and know this is an English speaking server, and that you will actually need to try to make an application. 

    If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord:  https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw https://imgur.com/jAPlD7R

  9. 1yPM0YR.png You are almost there but you could use a little bit of help.

    1. Your powergame definition is a little bit off, I would request you please take a look at the wiki and fix it. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
    2. Your biography is alright but you are still lacking a little bit of the servers lore, and it is honestly quite short I wish for you to make it a little bit longer. If you need help here is the wiki. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw https://imgur.com/jAPlD7R 

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