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Cornivore

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    THEGAMERSLIFE1

    in Accepted

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    Changed Status to Under Review

    1yPM0YR.pngYou are almost there but you could use some help.

    1. Yes you are playing a persons family member, but you dont actually have any of the servers lore in your biography, I would request you please add some of it into your biography.

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw 

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    RainbowGallaxy

    in Accepted

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    1yPM0YR.pngYou are almost there but you could use some help.

    1. The first thing is about your powergame definition it isnt actually correct so I would request you take a look and fix it. If you need help here is the wiki https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
    2. your biography does have lore and it is nice, but I would request you please make it longer and create a story out of it of how your persona fits in.

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw 

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    normalnoisyworm

    in Accepted

    Posted

    1yPM0YR.pngYou are almost there but you could use a bit of help.

    1. Could you please add a little bit more of a background to your persona in a biography it is a little too short, but you do have lore.

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw 

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    Willzerbeast_AKC

    in Accepted

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    48 minutes ago, Willzerbeast_AKC said:

    Would this addition to the bio do? 

    I still do not see any lore. if you could please maybe add a city where they are from. It will make it more clear for me.

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    LittleLillyMarsh

    in Accepted

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    Changed Status to Under Review

    1yPM0YR.png You are almost there but need some help.

    1. Your powergame definition needs a little help. I would request you take a look and edit it. If you need help here is the wiki. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
    2. Your biography is nice and it has lore. I would just ask if you could make it a little longer.

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 

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    xd_Evers

    in Accepted

    Posted

    Changed Status to Under Review

    1yPM0YR.png You are almost there but you can use some help.

    1. Your powergame definition is slightly off and I would request you take a second look upon it. If you need help here is the wiki. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
    2. your biography has none of the servers lore. It is good it just needs some of the servers lore into it. If you need help here is the wiki. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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    Cthulhuwu

    in Denied

    Posted

    letoGzw.png You have failed to meet my requirements. Please try again in 24 hours. And use the comments that I requested you to fix when you apply next.

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    Sweetycelic

    in Accepted

    Posted

    Changed Status to Under Review

    1yPM0YR.pngYou are almost there, you just need some help.

    1. Your biography is good. It is just lacking in server lore. I would request you please look over the wiki or forums and add some. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
    2. Your interesting facts are a little too short, I would request you please make them into sentences.

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 

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    AquaZelion

    in Accepted

    Posted

    Changed Status to Under Review

    1yPM0YR.png You are almost there but you could use some help.

    1. Currently, your biography is a little too short and is lacking in the servers lore department. I would request you add to it and put in some of the servers lore into it. If you need help here is the wiki. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
    2. Your skin is not really that lore friendly I would request you find a different one please or change the hair. if you need help here is an old skin thread. https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/161821-the-lotc-skin-archive/

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP

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