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Cornivore

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  1. Changed Status to Under Review

    1yPM0YR.png You are almost there, but you could use some help.

    1. Your powergame definition is a little off, I would request you please add to it and fix it. if you need help here is the wiki. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
    2. Your biography is good but it is lacking in server lore. I would request you please add some into it. if you need help here is the wiki. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
    3. Your interesting facts are just one word, I would request you please make them into sentences.

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 

  2. Changed Status to Under Review

    1yPM0YR.png You are almost there but you could use some help.

    1. Your biography is good but it is lacking in server lore. I would request you please add to your biography and put some of the servers lore into it. If you need help here is the wiki. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord:  https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

  3. Changed Status to Under Review

    1yPM0YR.png You are almost there but you could use some help.

    1. your biography is good, but it is lacking in the lore department. I would request you take a look and add some of the servers lore into it. If you need help here is the wiki https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord:  https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

  4. Changed Status to Under Review

    1yPM0YR.png You are there but you could use some help.

    1. Your biography is lacking slightly. You have a little bit of lore. But I would request you add some more and make it longer. If you need help here is the wiki. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 

  5. Changed Status to Under Review

    1yPM0YR.png You are almost there but you could use some help.

    1. Your biography is nice, but there is no server lore. I would request you please add some to it. If you need help here is the wiki. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 

  6. Changed Status to Under Review

    1yPM0YR.png You are almost there but you could use some help.

    1. Your powergame and metagame definition is off, I would request if you please take a look and fix them. if you need help here is the Wiki.  https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
    2. Your story is good, but it does not have any of the servers lore in it, could you please add some. if you need help there is the wiki. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page (ps. please change the color from black its hard to read.)

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord:  https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

  7. Changed Status to Under Review

    1yPM0YR.png

     You are almost there, but you need some help.

    1. The first thing is that this is an english speaking server, and this is currently not in english. I would request you please translate it for me.
    2. Your interesting facts are one word. please make them into sentences in English.
    3. You do have lore but I cannot actually tell anything out because it is not in English.
    4. Your metagaming and powergaming definition is also not in English so I would request you please translate it for me.

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4   

  8. Changed Status to Under Review

    1yPM0YR.png You are almost there, but you need some help.

    1. The first thing is that this is an english speaking server, and this is currently not in english. I would request you please translate it for me.
    2. Your interesting facts are one word. please make them into sentences in English.
    3. You do have lore but I cannot actually tell anything out because it is not in English.
    4. Your metagaming and powergaming definition is also not in English so I would request you please translate it for me.

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 

  9. Changed Status to Under Review

    1yPM0YR.pngYou are almost there, but you can use a little bit of help.

    1. the first thing is your biography it is way too short and there is none of the servers lore. I would also request you give him an actual name than X. If you need help here is the wiki https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
    2. Your metagame and powergame definition is not quite there. I would request you take a look at it and edit it. Here is the wiki for some help https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
    3. your interesting facts are not that interesting, you cant just be magic. I would request you please take time and make them better. In sentence form.

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord:  https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

  10. Changed Status to Under Review

    1yPM0YR.png You are almost there but you could use some help.

    1. The first obvious thing is your skin could you please find a better looking one. If you need help here is an old skin thread. https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/161821-the-lotc-skin-archive/
    2. Can you make your interesting facts a little bit longer.
    3. Your biography is nice, but it is missing some of the servers lore. I would request you please add to it and make it better and add servers lore to it. If you need help here is the wiki.  https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
    4. Also your powergame defintion is also a little incorrect. could you please look at the wiki aswell and make the edit.

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

  11. Changed Status to Under Review

    1yPM0YR.png You are almost there, but you can use a little bit of help.

    1. Your biography is good, the only problem it is missing a little bit of the servers lore. I would request you please add some to it. If you need help here's the wiki. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 

  12. Changed Status to Under Review

    1yPM0YR.png You are almost there, but you can use a little bit of help.

    1. Your biography is good, the only thing that is the issue as it doesn't have any like city names or lore, its just about the orcs. Could you please add some.

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 

     

     

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