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Yeah no.

how do you feel about this when will you stop cameronposting what do you work as

Whilst I once previously roleplayed a Shade myself, I was altogether against the circlejerk that happened for years upon years due to the existence of the Shade Gems. This seems mostly ok. There isn't really much I can suggest here for improvement, aside from clarifying on the whole new "Tsperkn zu'Serthekhur", as well as the link of Shade to Moz Strimoza. This could just as easily be put under a new name and not be associated with the old Shade, as none of it's origin has anything to do with what the previous origin was, under Arun'Asna, etc, all that **** in the past. I think you'd be able to accomplish much better RP in not at all linking this to the old Shade, instead stating Shade as a simple inspiration, and elaborating and creating your own origin, or perhaps a shift-over, an explanation for why this returned, after such an extended death. Those few who actually seek to roleplay Shade for the downside aesthetics, as I once had [though I've since moved on entirely from this lore in general, after having been the one to shoot it in the head in the end] who take it up once more, or anyone who does actually choose to take this up, should be aware it's clearly more of a downside feat with some added aesthetic to magic if you do have any magic. Whilst it's good on the aesthetics front, I don't really think there's any need for a Shade Gem at all, as it really just led to hierarchies - which I don't see this as something that should have a hierarchy at all. I also suggest you go more indepth into the nature of the Parasite itself, including it in this piece, etc. This is something I don't see merit in, alongside the Shade Gem and the unexplained origin. I think it could be something that could be possibly abused, and should be an ability outright listed along the two others, with proper emote counts and whatnot listed, as well as limitations and such, to prevent it from being abused. All in all, I think you should really elaborate more on the downsides of the feat, beyond the redlines and what's seen of it in the lore itself. It's not so much a Magic as it is a simple, antagonistic curse, of a far weaker level than it had originally been, that is capable of imbuing certain aesthetic properties unto other magics. I'm not against this at all, but like I said, I encourage you to not link it to the old Shade, as it seems to have a mix of unexplained origin and some history from a couple maps back when Tsuyose had the magic. When it comes to picking one or another out of the 2 origins, I'd go for the former - elaborate on this unexplained origin, cut off the old origin, as the two mix like oil and water. I think it'd make it more appealing to explore for anyone who does bear this curse - emphasis on curse.

A soldier, eyes wroth in cruel nature, clenched about his pipe - emptying the contents unto the grasses beneath. It had been long enough; all he'd sought to bring to those who sought only to deny his God, and aid his enemies, would now come. Soon enough, his shovel would come to use. "One has withdrawn from amongst the rank of the vermin; those few who reside within those walls who I trust must begone, lest they face what fate the knife-eared ilk will face. War comes; let the earth be rend asunder." muttered he, gripping at the shovel; work was to be done.

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This seems like a grossly overpowered feat - like Sensory Illusion taken to the absolute maximum, and yet no mana, and no slots? You describe it as a Mental Magic, which would group it into the same place as Sensory Illusion, despite this seemingly being written to be 'weaker Farseer.' I actually see no disadvantages in this feat, which is extremely concerning, alongside the lack thereof of any slots whatsoever. Please, please - if you want this to actually be viable as a feat and not simply be used to be abused, add actual flaws, downsides, etc. There is no sort of downside to the clear disruption that Dreamforging will have to the natural circadian rhythm and sleep pattern of the body, nor any downsides as a result of the extended amount of time you'll be spending asleep - nor anything about how you're actually going to get asleep, especially if you're in a situation or environment where sleep may not be viable, or even possible. Say you were experiencing sleepless nights - if you were to take a medicine or herb that would induce sleep [REM sleep], how would it affect the dream? Etc. Doesn't look good for me chief. Lacks so much detail it's astonishing. This would be a good magic if it were for some kind of MMORPG, not a place like LoTC where people find a way to abuse everything about a magic - in this case, just the sheer lack of any sort of downsides of using the magic or having it in the first place, or, not even that, any changes it'll cause, good, bad, or neutral. No attempt at exploring it beyond some shoddy attempt at being the Everly Brothers, and their hit song "All I Have To Do Is Dream." Because, in this case, it isn't.

Yeah that's fair enough man - group was a motley band of people from many different experiences over many different years, some had different desires over others, since then I really chose to tighten up the group, but it's nice to see the good feedback and I'll take it all into account, man. Throw me your Steam on Discord, hopefully soon we can play together boss.

A question, man - been a while since you were in my group for sure, but what do you remember best about the experience [your favourite part of it / what happened that you enjoyed the most] and what do you think I could improve on when it comes to leading a group and generally guiding roleplay?

yeah, your right, I probably would've destroyed you in Mordhau it's sad to see you go man, keep in touch for sure - you know where to find me, you've got my Discord. You were always a great addition to the group brother.

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A soldier, eyes full of sullenness, grave haunting, and prophetic madness, grumbled at the sight of the Crusade - silently pocketing it, as a pale hand raised to his lips so as he might cough, expending the contents of his throat - lifting fist to the grey skies. "They will it. The GOD, perhaps neij. There will be bodies to bury; this, I know. Aesh Dea."

Redlines are like 87 words. If you want an actual alchemy addition, have the mind to format it properly and write the redlines properly. Seems like it's a neat concept but you haven't thought it out well enough for it to really get a forum post. Why would you make a thread and apply when you haven't actually thought it out much at all? Clearly the fact that you had to add a redline for clarification and you're yet to actually clarify what would happen if you drink it again after those 5 years means that it isn't well thought out enough yet. I'd personally suggest selfdenying this 1 and coming back once you've got it all thought out and have a proper answer to every question that anyone will throw you way. Offering an extension of life is a huge alchemical breakthrough, where previously the only ways of achieving such were twisted, complicated features that couldn't be put in a bottle. The name makes it clear enough; it's life in a bottle, and yet the fact that the lore is written so simply and doesn't have much clarification at all on anything, nor proper redlines, clearly means it needs much more work before there's even an inkling of a chance of it being accepted.

Is this able to be infinitely stacked? I sure hope not.

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