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Keefy

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    Your application has been Denied.

    Please rectify the following issues before reapplying.

    -Include 1-3 lore references within the bio. I see you referencing Mystery and I am well aware he is a player but this does not constitute a lore reference.

    Please fix these before reapplication. We also highly suggest using a non-Guest account next time so we can help you along the process.

    You can also join the New Player Discord for further assistance:

    We hope to see you adventuring soon!

  2. Changed Status to Under Review

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    Hello! You have been accepted to the server!

    However, I would like for you to please touch up on a few things in the meantime.

    These are only suggestions.

    Please try and look into the more with a better eye. Sutica, for instance, is a nation and not just a town. Small things like this. Having details straightened up will help prevent your rp from becoming clogged up or confusing.

    Otherwise, you're fine to be adventuring on LoTc!

    Please join the New Player Discord for further assistance:
    https://discord.gg/Qa9MuA

    Have a lovely time!

  3. Changed Status to Under Review

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    Your application has been denied!

    Please correct the following issues before reapplying.

    -Please select a timezone

    -Please correct your meta-gaming definition.

    -Please correct your power-gaming definition.

    -Your bio is lacking and also requires 1-3 lore references. Please work on its length and detail before reapplying.

    -Please flesh out a description.

    -Your skin doesn't actually show the character. Please rectify this.

    -Two of your facts can be construed to create instances of power-gaming. Please adjust your interesting facts.

    Feel free to join our New Player Discord for assistance in adjusting the application before re-submission:

    We also highly suggest making a Forum Account so we may walk you through the process smoothly.

    Thank you for applying. We hope to see you soon.

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    Your application has been denied.

    Feel free to reapply after correcting the following issues.

    -Please flesh your bio out and try adding one or two more lore references to it.

    We suggest making a Forum Account for your next application, so we can help you through the process better.

    You can also join the New Player Discord for further assistance:
    https://discord.gg/Gu2rDV

    We hope to see you adventuring!

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    Accepted! Welcome to Lotc!

    Please make sure to keep the rules you agreed to in mind, and have a good time!

    We hope to see you around!

    Happy Adventuring!

  6. Changed Status to Under Review

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    Hello! Your application requires the following changes.

    - Please correct your meta-gaming definition. It's close but not quite on point.

    - Please correct your power-gaming definition. Just like the above, it's close but not quite there.

    - Please try and include one to three lore references within your application. We see  you citing the Irongut clan but that's considered regular knowledge, and would like to see you reference some more topics that show a fundamental understanding of the World-Lore.

    - Skin correction. The skin is good, but the skin tone is not correct to a Cavern Dwarf. It's too...blue. This just needs to be adjusted.


    Please correct these and apply the changes, and we will do well to review it as soon as possible.

    For further assistance please join the New Player Discord here:
    https://discord.gg/d9fs9k

    We hope to see you adventuring soon!

  7. Changed Status to Under Review

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    Your application has been denied.

    Please resubmit a new application with the following corrections.

    -Please correct your meta-gaming definition.

    -Please correct your power-gaming definition.

    -Please include at least one to three lore references in your backstory.

    -Try and include a flaw in your attributes. This isn't required. It merely looks good for the character.

     

    It would also make the process easier if you made a proper Forum Account next time you apply!

    You can also join the New Player Discord here:
    https://discord.gg/rb4WY5

    There, we of the AT can provide assistance and help.

    Thank you, and we hope to see you adventuring soon!

     

  8. Changed Status to Under Review

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    Welcome to the Server!

    Your application has been reviewed and accepted, now you can join the rest of  us on Lotc!

    Please take your time to acclimate yourself to the server, and read up on more lore, to help keep yourself familiarized.

    You can also join the New Player Discord for further assistance here:
    https://discord.gg/rb4WY5

    Please enjoy yourself, and we hope to see you adventuring soon!

  9. Changed Status to Under Review

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    Your application has been denied.

    Thankfully this is a simple fix. The only thing you need to correct is.

    -While your bio is solid, please use some more concrete lore examples. You seem to be referencing something that is possibly to date, but it's hard to tell.

    Otherwise, I highly recommend making a forum account before you reapply.

    Feel free to also join the New Player Discord as well for additional help:
    https://discord.gg/rb4WY5

    We hope to see you adventuring soon!

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