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    [Smoggers / Tinkering] [TA] Lockages

    in Accepted Teacher Applications

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    Pending. Please make the following changes. You may PM me on discord (pundimonium#9142) when you are finished or if you have any questions:

    • Describe the extent to which smoggers disrupts nature.
    • What are some of the tertiary effects of Red Oil? 
    • Though incredibly freeform, there are some limits to Smoggers Machinery even as a MArt. What are they? 
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    [Air Evocation] [TA] teawithFrisket

    in Accepted Teacher Applications

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    Pending. Please make the following changes to your application. You may PM me on discord (pundimonium#9142) when you are finished or if you have any questions. 

    • Please explain what the Void is, how a mage connects to it, and how they use it to draw their spells.
    • Detail the properties of conjured air. How does it differ from regular wind/air found in nature? How it is the same?
    • Please put some more detail into your teaching example.
    • Some of your descriptions in the emotes are worded oddly and not all too clear. I suggest you go over them to make them more understandable.
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    [Sorvian] [CA] SlitheryE

    in Accepted Creature Apps

    Posted

    Pending. Please make the following changes to your app. You may PM me on discord (pundimonium#9142) when you are finished:

    • Please use complete sentences for your description, rather than just bullet-point listing of features/traits.
    • Describe the "means of revival" you've alluded to.
    • Give more details on the CA itself. Can it use magic? What are some of its limits? How does the creator influence their ideology, etc. 
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    [Kha'pantera] [CA] Sir_Vilku

    in Denied

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    Denied. Your application was the key details and features of the creature. On a CA you are explaining the characteristic of the race you are applying for, such as their origins, abilities, weaknesesses, etc. rather than the character of the CA. As it appears you are an older player returning to the server, I recommend reaching out to a member of the Community Team to get more updated on the server.

     

    If you have any questions regarding your app, please reach me on discord (pundimonium#9142). I am always happy to help.

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