Salty

OOC ((MC Name: SaltyVibes__)) ((Discord: Salty#7987 )) ((Timezone: CST )) IN-CHARACTER What is your name? Grandor Irongut Why seek membership to the Mages Guild? To advance my knowledge of both the void, as well as alchemical reagents, and to aid others in their learning What arts, if any, do you currently practice? Hydromancy, Pyromancy, Arcanisim What position do you desire to attain upon acceptance? Adeptus Majoris/Minor When should you be contacted for an interview? whenever besides like, 12am-12pm cst cause sleep

What burnsy said is pretty spot on. I also think maybe selecting a different daemon, or even making it runic in nature and having the stones be monoliths that’s use a different type of rune could be very dwarven and very cool. I’m not sure if I like the use of garumdir as he is more a god of innovation, and I don’t really see carvings in stone monoliths being his style. If you want I could help with a rework and some formatting, cause I think this has a lot of potential. I’m kinda restricted to my phone rn but if you message me on discord we can toss ideas around

You could put the google doc as a readable thing on the post in order to make it more readable while you try to fix it. Also, I think this would be better as a tiered feat, it doesn’t have enough to be a full scale magic, and most crafting Magic’s tend to be a feat.

I think the concept of this magic is cool. I think it needs more backstory and explanation. The formatting makes it a bit confusing and a difficult read.

I was so excited to play a skeleton, I loved the lore and I wish it passed. Big sad

Godspeed, get well soon

I mean I suppose, but I feel like limiting rp due to an unlikely event that someone will be able to get clericism and chi, or clericism and kani, or all three in an extremely unlikely circumstance, is kinda strange. No reason to limit rp like that. Plus, you can’t even use chi and clericism at the same time, you would have to pick one or the other, you would just be more versatile I suppose. But I don’t know enough about kani to comment on that. edit: to add on to this, if you want to limit something, limit it irp. For example, irp I don’t accept chi students who are actively warriors because I don’t want them to stray from the path of hulian and abuse the magic. If clerics don’t want someone to use chi and clericism then they can just not teach chi monks, it’s that simple. No reason to restrict rp in lore via compatability unless there is a lore reason it should be restricted, in my opinion.

Kani and chi both don’t negatively affect the soul or blemish it in anyway, thus they are compatible.

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Haha cleric light goes kachow

I kinda dont mind this, i think it could be interesting to have telekenisis just be a fun aesthetic of voidal magic, but heyo thats just my opinion

damn that was a fun read

sorry im commenting so much i just genuinely like this peice of lore and want it to succeed. So when they die, they fix themselves, but what happens if they are decapitated? or ‘nuggeted’ [all of their limbs besides their head are removed] will they regrow limbs? or will they simply recusitate without a head and without limbs? if all of their body is split up and hidden in diffrent places, is that a forced PK?

honestly id just make it so that they cant FTB. like, i understand why you want to leave player freedom for that sort of thing, but this turns it into borderline necrophillia if ya know what i mean

its gonna be pretty difficult to find a freshly pk’d body of a person, pk’s dont happen every day and it limits the ability to create these creatures. Think its neat, just am a little concerned about this.

Dude just let people have fun

after skimming over this, it seems neat, would enjoy to rp one again some day if i go back to that type of rp. Very cool, would create one. here is some feedback as someone who played a olog for quite a while cool, this is normal this is something that shouldnt be happening, ologs are basiclly like giant children in their thought processes, they shouldnt be able to forge, they are that dumb. Forging is a complex thing. Now, aiding other uruk smiths in their forging isnt hard, but they cant do it on their own. this wont fly irp, while its a cool thought, any olog that was known not to be worshiping spirits would just be killed by the uruk. Also, as their minds should be highly impressionable and dumb, akin to children, it makes much more sense for them to simply follow the beleifs of those around them, which will mean it will commonly be orcs, and spiritualism this is a little nit picky, but i think its silly for ologs to be able to read. more personal preference though, i understand why the option of reading basic texts is wanted. this is neat flavor stuff, might want to make it oocly consent based, just cause people get so antsy about how their character dies (Like, if someone is eaten and doesnt pk, yet you use their head to grow a second head, they could theoreticly get mad about that) it isnt likely, i like the 2-3 head concept tho a irl week is a ingame year ? i actually think this is neat, gives me lotr vibes. may want to define “long enough” more explicitly, however i hope that helps, neat lore i approve ❤️

Enchanting recharging was removed, so having the amount of spells cast before recharge doesn’t make sense. It’s simply a timer before the item has to be remade, and the size of lightstone (at least in paladin lore) doesn’t effect that.

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