Draft 1! And my first ever submission! Please give some feedback. <3   Credit to the Song Druid for the original, denied lore. I obtained permission to run with it, and take some creative liberties... Attempting to pay regard to a few of the criticisms that were raised against it the last time, and giving it a few kicks that I may have went a little overboard with. All in all, though, I've worked really hard on this for a while, and I would appreciate if it was at least given some t