KeyLime17

Plzmanplz it has been 2 days. I cannot hanle this anymore man plzman

On 1/14/2024 at 12:01 AM, ECS1999 said:

Pending.
Please elaborate on the different sections that form Earth Evocation.

Done!

MC Name:

         KeyLime17

Character's Name:

         Henry Venlic

Character's Age:

         Ima be real, lost track probably around 30

Character's Race:

         Human

Link to your accepted MA:

What magic(s) will you be teaching?

         Earth Evocation

Describe this magic or a creature as a whole:

Earth (bending) Evocation, is a voidal art, it focuses upon conjuring and earthly material from the void and manipulating it, it is rooted in strength and unyielding nature of the Earth element, and mages harness its potential for diverse application such as "throwing sand" or "throwing a rock" or "maybe a slightly bigger rock" among other things.

This art takes up one magic slot, and requires a stable connection to the void to cast.

Are there different sections or subsections of magic? Can those be elaborated upon?

Sand Offensive:

The ability to conjure sandlike material, but instead of forming it into a bigger object it remains in its sandlike state. Can be used to hinder or blind targets. The more advanced version of this would be the casting of a Sandstorm, which conjures... a larger flurry or sand, hindering and potentially blinding targets within its range.

Earthen Defensive:

The ability to manipulate this art in a defensive manner. The mage can summon obstacles such as rock or dirt mounds to act as a barrier/shield, the more advanced version of this would be the Earthen Dome, which conjures a earth dome spanning over three meters and is able to protect the mage and people nearby.

Earthen Offensive:

The ability to conjure a more 'rocky' material and potentially use them as projectiles, these can range from pebbles/rock, spikes/boulders and to cyclones (Rocknado)

Conjure Earth - Non Combative:

A simple ability but a very useful one, upon conjuration, the mage can manipulate the shape and form of the earthen material they conjured, with these material being more detailed the more trained the mage is. This can only be used for non combative situations, and can be very good for a magic show at a party.

Can you give an example of a casting emote, of a spell of your choice?

I honestly thought I could post a screenshot in this box but it wouldnt let me so Ill just type out what I did

[Connect]
[!]Henry would take a deep breath through his nose, feeling a slight tingle within his hands and a small pulsing behind his eyes

[Charge]

[!]As Henry continues his concentration he lifts his arms and opens his eyes, only for a golden glow of a million bits of sand flowing like a dune within his eyes

[!]and a golden mist slowly forming around his fingers twirling until they cover his arm whole

[Cast]

[!]Henry would then twitch his arms forth pushing said dust around his arms to form a mud-like barrier a meter in front, towering higher than his own height

[For people who dont know what I did]

[!]I.E: Earthen barrier spell

Can you give an example of a teaching-emote (interacting with another) of a spell of your choice?

[!]Henry looking at his student dawns a smirk on his face and says "To know the art, you must feel the art. Observe..."

[Connect]

[!]His eyes would begin to blow like a dune of golden sand, and his fingertips twitch.

[Cast]

[!]He would then stretch out his right arm only for a golden mist to collect around his fingers, and right at that moment that mist

[!]transforms into sand blasting towards his target (the Student)

(I then rolled a 19/20 and hit my student with sand, clearly showing them superiority of sand and why they need to understand it

Say your student powergames during or after teaching, how do you reprimand that?

I would halt further teaching, give them time to explain their course of actions and where they went wrong, If I can see they are sincere and it was accidental as everyone can make a mistake when first doing magic, I may continue teaching but with a closer eye. If what they did is unforgivable then their teaching is concluded and they will have to seek out another teacher.

Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

         No

Do you agree to keep the ST updated on the status of your magic app?:

         Sure, preferably discord

Have you applied to teach this magic on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app.

         I have not applied

2 hours ago, Sorcerio said:

Pending. Please expand upon the information pertaining to the spiritual and mental nature of phantoms, their tangible/intangible forms, capabilities, progression, as well as the four primary types of phantoms along with that of revenants. 

I have edited it, hopefully it meets the requirements.

MC Name: KeyLime17

Character's Name: Henry Venlic

Character's Age: 86

Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):

         Human

Transformed form:

         Phantom (Revenant)

Creator's MC Name:

         N/A

Creator's RP Name:

         N/A

Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:

A lore of a Phantom is a creature that has suffered greatly in their living years,  and have a regret or something else that holds them back from moving forward into the afterlife. With whatever holding them back these phantoms would wander the mortal realm. They would not know that they have died and will be able to learn of their demise later on forcing them to “decide” on their state.

The Ghosts can appear as four different ‘classes.’ These would include A Poltergeist, Specter, Graven and Revenant which is what I am going for. Phantoms being in the physical and living world are always under pressure and suffer for it, resulting in multitudes of mental disorders/illnesses, every phantom suffers the same general illness of being depressed/ saddened and asocial. Each ‘personality’ or illness the phantom suffers would differentiate on how they are still linked back to the living world and what experience they suffered in both the living years and now undeath.

Phantoms manifest themselves in a metaphysical substance known as “ectoplasm” which is what gives them their stereotypical appearance and abilities, such as and not limited to: Being able to have objects pass through them, or in general the Phantom not appearing to the common eye.

Their main weakness would reside in Sunlight, making it uncomfortable for the Phantom to be in it for 10 minutes, some varieties of Phantoms force them to feel as if they were about to explode in pure fire, and suffer greatly for it, this would persuade Phantoms to stick to darker areas and if they travel then do it by night. Specters and Graven have exceptions, being that Specters are able to be in the light longer but feel very uncomfortable while Graven have the ability to wear cloaks or pieces of armor to avoid the light.
The other weaknesses would include Holy Magic, Voidal Magic, Shamanic Power and Aurum (Gold) Phantoms cannot pass solid barriers made of Aurum but maybe be able to pass through more “weakened” lines such as Aurum shavings or dust. Aurum regardless if a solid barrier or not will force the Phantom from being unseeable and cause immense suffering. If a Phantom possesses a person they might be able to pass through the barriers of Aurum and ignore the effects.

Phantoms who start as a Revenant will feel unnatural in their being, they will wander and appear in relation on their death, their voices shallow or distant, their mental state will be filled with confusion like they are in a dream constantly suffering, prone to anger or sadness. They are driven to learn about themselves on what is going on and what happened to them. But once they figure out what has happened and their demise they will have to react to it, resulting in anger, peace of ignoring it to continue their path/ duty. 

They would suffer severely from aurum and voidal magic(s), since their mind is yet to stabilize being the most vulnerable to any affliction.

Revenants are stuck to be one of the weakest in terms of ability, unable to do what a regular being cannot do, they cannot pass through solid barriers or locked doors and gates.

and would be able to float no higher than a foot off the ground.

They can demanifest themselves bringing their souls closer to the Elysian plane and appear invisible but not when they are in the sight of a mortal, they can be forced out of this state by Magic(s) or Aurum.
Their grasp is feeble and the would be unable to pick up objects without them eventually falling through, they struggle to open things but can still attempt to twist handles and move doors or extinguish small lights like a candle.

Poltergeists are another variation of Phantoms, (but since I am not applying to be them I hope you will forgive me for not going into as much detail as I did into Revenant) their mind is in denial of their new nature, they know what they are now but they are tortured by that knowledge and their disorder manifests it to the extreme. Their anger and state of chaos pulls their attention away from fearing of being in pain but are more or less angered and enraged by it, causing most attempts of harm to them resulting in them retaliating. Their negativity and rage boosts their ability to manipulate objects their powers fueled by hate an disdain for mortals. 

They are much more powerful and aggressive than a revenant especially once they haunt a specific location binding themselves to it, allowing them to have greater strength in their ability.

Specters are white in color and found inner peace in their demise, their trials of undeath weigh upon them regardless, their manifestation is more appealing to look at than other counterparts and are more defined than a Revenant, Specters are not prone to fighting but are still elusive to mortals and will avoid conflict when possible, with the found peace of their death they rarely linger in the living world and can reach a point where they pass on to the soulstream unless they find a reason for their desire to stay.

they show an aura of peace in the mortals that are near or inside their “haunted/ sancuary” area.

A Graven is a spirit that may have accepted their death but deem it not as important as their task or goal. Anyone trying to impede on their goal will be met with hostility or other means that would have the Graven remove them from their path. This task can be easily achievable, repetitive or impossible to complete but their desire to do so will outshine. They unlike all other Phantoms are the closest to the mortal plane than all others by sheer will to fulfill their motivation. They would appear similar as their form once they were alive but a skin tone of pure darkness or white, their strength capabilities are equal to their living capability and they would be unable to progress their strength further, Their mentality is filled with utter obsession and devotion to their task, if they fail to do their task they can become enraged becoming more dangerous than a poltergeist could and deeply saddened. Because of their single-mindedness they are next to poltergeist in terms of response to pain and things that come in their way. They are able to be injured by most mundane weapons but still not completely fatal. They would be able to ‘conjure’ tools to aid them in fulfilling their task by expanding their ectoplasmic form.

I wont describe what a phantom beast is since I am not playing as some animal.
 

If this construct or creature has some form of aesthetic choice, can you describe how they look? 

Henry would be appearing as a grey and pale Revenant, with scars on his neck from strangling and a lost eye 

Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

         N/A

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         N/A

Do you understand that if this creature's lore is undergoing an activity trial and that trial fails, you will no longer be able to play this creature and will be forced to either revert the character back to its normal form (if it was a transformative type) or stop playing the character entirely (if it is an entirely new creature)?:

         Yes I understand.

Memey RP or using this CA for subpar villain/bandit RP can lead to your app being denied, even after acceptance. Please put "I understand" as your response once you have read this part and understand the consequences.

         I understand.

Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

         No.

Allahu Ahkbar 

Saleel Al-Sawarim

In Change we move forward – Stephen Baldrick for Tribune

Greetings my fellow common peoples of Haense!

Today I announce that I will take part in the coming elections of the Royal Duma, I aim to become a tribune and representative of you! The main reason Haense stands united.

I will do all within my power to support the peoples voice and will within the Duma.

-  Tax Problem:

Right now our people struggle with high taxes, but I am a realist I know that the current regent is not likely to change them even if the Duma approves, but I will promise to try and fix this by taking on the Crowns decisions that are against the people and promoting a new path for Haense.

This new path is of acceptance of others, currently many other races such as orcs, wonks are not liked amongst the empire, I will support more freedom for them since I believe that the more people are housed the more the government earns, which will make the crown more lenient on lowering taxes in return.

- Our limited education:

I am currently living amongst you as a fellow citizen and I have seen myself that the only education we are served is within Military, Orphanages and small organizations.

My plan will be to support a construction of a larger and better school that will bring new jobs for citizens as teachers that will improve the minds of our younger population, so they strive to be great people in the future!

- Promoting our Faith:

I see only a small and barely noticeable structure called a ‘chapel’ that is clearly unworthy for out great Faith! We need to begin a new construction in either old territory close to the middle of Haense or in new expanded land of the City. This construction will be a great Church in the name of God. We will have the Church and Military work together to root out any cultist and illegal activity that has risen up lately! Our city must not become a city for heathens to prosper!

- Bring Security for our homes:

Our homes get robbed, vandalized, infiltrated by people we don't want! My own home was vandalized by heathen scum! I will make sure that security for our great city grows, whatever it takes! Investigation teams, patrols, anything to make sure our homes wont be broken into again!

Final Words.

Your vote is the deciding factor to bring change in our great city, and I wish to call upon you... Our dearest and most important people.. the common folk of Haense, to bring forth your votes and support change within the city! And have our people move forward under God and Country to a prosperous land!

 ~In Change we move forward~

IGN: KeyLime17

Character Name: Stephen Baldrick

Age: 27

Place of Residence / Street Address: Bihar I

Position: Tribune

Name of your Charter:

Ember

Owner's Username:

KeyLime17

Owner's Roleplay Name:

Stephen Venlic

Location (XYZ):

-2363 80 1637

Tier applying for:

Tier 1

Ignore this I only recently found out charters are handled ingame

Discord: KeyLime#1447

Preferred time of interview: Any normal time EST

Example RP: WHERES THE LAMB SAUCE? ITS RAW!!

[ROLEPLAY]

Name: Delnir Shefixa

Race, and are you a citizen of the Silver State?: Helf and yes

Preferred position: Chef/ Cook preferably head

Why should you get this position?: Because I’m already a chef and starting an academy for aspiring chefs soon.

MC Name: KeyLime17

Character's Name: Henry Venlic

Character's Age: died at 21

Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):

         Human

Transformed form:

         Undead

Creator's MC Name:

         KeyLime17

Creator's RP Name:

         Henry Venlic

Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:

Henry Venlic was a devout worshipper of a Demon of flames, he was so devout that even in death he continues his worship, to spread this heretic faith across Arcas.

In his human form he was a vile person always tempted to either kill or torture other individuals.

Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

         no

Do you agree to keep the MT updated on the status of your magic app by using the Magic List Errors topic?:

         yes

Are you aware that if this creature's lore is undergoing an activity trial and that trial fails, you will no longer be able to play this creature and will be forced to either revert the character back to its normal form (if it was a transformative type) or stop playing the character entirely (if it is an entirely new creature)?:

         (kinda new creature) I want this to be in a new persona

Do you consent to accepting what may happen to this character?:

         Yes

Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

         no

Name: Henry Venlic

IGN: KeyLime17

Discord: KeyLime#1447

Age: 21 (17 IRL)

Position of interest:

Kvuensbutjantas or Koecks

Mc Name: KeyLime17

RP Name: Henry Venlic

Am I a mage? No but I read some books.

Available at any time from 10 Am- 11pm EST

Discord: KeyLime#1447