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Amelica

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  1. Changed Status to Under Review

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    Unfortunately, your application has been denied because you made too many errors. Here is some feedback on what you should have fixed: 

     

    •  Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are plagiarized; please write them in your own words. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand.

    • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! There are many things that you can reference including but not limited to existing settlements, wars, and religions. Here are some links that may help you find some!

    • Your Character Biography is a bit short; please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Here are some questions you can ask yourself: where are they from? What was their family like? In what situation did they grow up? How did they get where they are today?

    • Your Physical Description is inconsistent with your character’s race. Please visit the wiki page for said race and read about the acceptable physical attributes.

    • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one noticeably negative trait that will strongly impact your character’s way of life. Anything that can be considered a fault in their personality is acceptable.

    • Your Skin is not up to LotC’s standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you can’t find anything better.

    • Your Skin does not match the physical attributes of your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly!
    • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one dialogue and one action. 


    You may reapply at any time as long as you correct the mistakes that were pointed out above. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @amelica#8025, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

  2. Changed Status to Under Review

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    Unfortunately, your application has been denied because you did not make the required corrections on time. Here is some feedback on what you should have fixed: 

     


    You may reapply at any time as long as you correct the mistakes that were pointed out above. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @amelica#8025, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

  3. QhGzOdk5ugwvQHfsB9JUHEh7pUQ3qPxxg1ybFo_o

     

    Unfortunately, your application has been denied because it had too many errors. Here is some feedback on the aforementioned errors: 

     

    •  Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! There are many things that you can reference including but not limited to existing settlements, wars, and religions. Here are some links that may help you find some!

    • Your Character Biography is a bit short; please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Here are some questions you can ask yourself: where are they from? What was their family like? In what situation did they grow up? How did they get where they are today?
    • Your Character Biography states that your character’s family was wealthy and sold their vegetables to the nobles and the king. This is not possible; your character cannot have been renowned at all, not even through familial ties, prior to acceptance on the server.
    • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one noticeably negative trait that will strongly impact your character’s way of life. Anything that can be considered a fault in their personality is acceptable.

    • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one dialogue and one action. 

     

    You may reapply at any time as long as you correct the mistakes that were pointed out above. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @amelica#8025, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

  4. QhGzOdk5ugwvQHfsB9JUHEh7pUQ3qPxxg1ybFo_o

     

    Unfortunately, your application has been denied because it had too many errors. Here is some feedback on the aforementioned errors: 

     

    • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! There are many things that you can reference including but not limited to existing settlements, wars, and religions. Here are some links that may help you find some!

    • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you can’t figure out what more to add, here are some questions you can ask yourself: what is your character afraid of? How do they act around strangers? What is their resting disposition?

    • Your Physical Description is inconsistent with your character’s race. Please visit the wiki page for said race and read about the acceptable physical attributes.

    • Your Skin is not up to LotC’s standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you can’t find anything better.

    • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please find one that matches. Alternatively, you may correct your physical description so it matches the skin you use.

     

    You may reapply at any time as long as you correct the mistakes that were pointed out above. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @amelica#8025, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

     

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    Congratulations, you’ve been accepted! Welcome to Lord of the Craft!

     

    Now that you’ve been accepted, you will spawn in Cloud Temple as soon as you log in. You’ll also notice that you can now interact with the world around you. If you need any help, find yourself confused, or get yourself stuck in an unsavory situation, you can message me in-game by doing /msg Amelica [message]. If I’m not online, you can find me on discord  @amelica#8025. Additionally, if you find yourself needing any more guidance in-game and I am not around, please type ‘/creq [message as to what you need]’ into the chat and another Community Team Member will get to you as soon as possible!

     

    After reading the information below and logging in to LotC, you will find yourself in Tutorial Island and the NPCs there will give you a thorough overview of how to roleplay on LoTC. If you find yourself still confused or want a proper, customized introduction to the world of Lord of the Craft, please run this command in the chat:

     

    /creq I have just been accepted and would like a Wilven Monk!

     

    Also, when you first join, the bot that automatically whitelists you after the acceptance of your application may be down. If so, please go into the wandering soul channel (type #ws in the chat) and ask for a Community Team Member to accept you!

     

    Next, I highly recommend that you join the main LotC discord using the invite link below. Also, please look through the New Player Hub by clicking the second link!

     

    In addition, I recommend that you take a look at our Settlement Guides. The settlements that you may be interested in based on your character’s race are linked below.

     

    If you aren’t interested in any of those, take a look at our Settlement Guide Hub!

  6. Changed Status to Under Review

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    Unfortunately, your application has been denied because you did not make the required corrections on time. Here is some feedback on what you should have fixed: 

     

    •  Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. 

    • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! There are many things that you can reference including but not limited to existing settlements, wars, and religions. Here are some links that may help you find some!

    • Your Character Biography is a bit short; please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Here are some questions you can ask yourself: where are they from? What was their family like? In what situation did they grow up? How did they get where they are today?

    • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding more detail. If you’re lost on what to add, consider describing things like height, eye colour, hair colour, and hair length.

    • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one noticeably negative trait that will strongly impact your character’s way of life. Anything that can be considered a fault in their personality is acceptable.

    • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you can’t figure out what more to add, here are some questions you can ask yourself: what is your character afraid of? How do they act around strangers? What is their resting disposition?

    • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one dialogue and one action. 

    • Your Roleplay Scenario Response must include dialogue in quotes to distinguish the speaking from the actions.
    • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application; I am having a difficult time understanding parts of it. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 


    You may reapply at any time as long as you correct the mistakes that were pointed out above. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @amelica#8025, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

  7. Changed Status to Under Review

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    Unfortunately, your application has been denied because it had too many errors. Here is some feedback on the aforementioned errors:

     

    • Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand.

    • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! There are many things that you can reference including but not limited to existing settlements, wars, and religions. Here are some links that may help you find some!

    •  Your Physical Description is inconsistent with your character’s race. Please visit the wiki page for said race and read about the acceptable physical attributes.

    • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one noticeably negative trait that will strongly impact your character’s way of life. Anything that can be considered a fault in their personality is acceptable.

    • Your Skin does not match the physical attributes of your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly!

    • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one dialogue from your character and one action. 

     

    You may reapply at any time as long as you correct the mistakes that were pointed out above. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @amelica#8025, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

  8. Changed Status to Under Review

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    Your application has been put on pending. The following changes must be made before you can be accepted:

     

    • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one noticeably negative trait that will strongly impact your character’s way of life. Anything that can be considered a fault in their personality is acceptable. 

     

    If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @amelica#8025 to let me know. If you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message; please don’t be afraid to approach me with any questions that arise.

     

    If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! I also highly recommend that you join our discord and read through the New Player Hub to gain access to a plethora of important links and information.

  9. Changed Status to Under Review

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    Unfortunately, your application has been denied because you did not make the required corrections on time. Here is some feedback on what you should have fixed: 

     

    • Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand.

    • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! There are many things that you can reference including but not limited to existing settlements, wars, and religions. Here are some links that may help you find some!

    • Your Character Biography is a bit short; please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Here are some questions you can ask yourself: where are they from? What was their family like? In what situation did they grow up? How did they get where they are today?

    • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one noticeably negative trait that will strongly impact your character’s way of life. Anything that can be considered a fault in their personality is acceptable.

    • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please find one that matches. Alternatively, you may correct your physical description so it matches the skin you use.


    You may reapply at any time as long as you correct the mistakes that were pointed out above. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @amelica#8025, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

  10. QhGzOdk5ugwvQHfsB9JUHEh7pUQ3qPxxg1ybFo_o

     

    Unfortunately, your application has been denied because you answered no to the rules. Here is some feedback on what you should fix:

     

    •  Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. 

    • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! There are many things that you can reference including but not limited to existing settlements, wars, and religions. Here are some links that may help you find some!

    • Your Character Biography is a bit short; please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Here are some questions you can ask yourself: where are they from? What was their family like? In what situation did they grow up? How did they get where they are today?

    • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding more detail. If you’re lost on what to add, consider describing things like height, eye colour, hair colour, and hair length.

    • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must be purely personality; don’t include anything that references your character’s physical disposition.

    • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one noticeably negative trait that will strongly impact your character’s way of life. Anything that can be considered a fault in their personality is acceptable.

    • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you can’t figure out what more to add, here are some questions you can ask yourself: what is your character afraid of? How do they act around strangers? What is their resting disposition?

    • Your Skin is not up to LotC’s standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you can’t find anything better.

    • Your Character Name is inadequate.

    • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one dialogue and one action. 

     

    You may reapply at any time as long as you correct the mistakes that were pointed out above. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @amelica#8025, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

  11. Changed Status to Under Review

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    Unfortunately, your application has been denied because you did not make the required corrections on time. Here is some feedback on what you should have fixed: 

     

    •  Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! There are many things that you can reference including but not limited to existing settlements, wars, and religions. Here are some links that may help you find some!

    •  Your Character Biography states that your character leads his peers. Prior to joining the server, your character cannot be a leader, nor can he be well-known. All such respect must be earned through active roleplay on the server.

    • Your Physical Description is inconsistent with your character’s race. Please visit the wiki page for said race and read about the acceptable physical attributes.

    • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one noticeably negative trait that will strongly impact your character’s way of life. Anything that can be considered a fault in their personality is acceptable.

    • Your Skin is not up to LotC’s standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you can’t find anything better.


    You may reapply at any time as long as you correct the mistakes that were pointed out above. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @amelica#8025, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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