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Pompilidae

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    Your application has been denied at this time. The primary reason is that your application indicates a lack of a solid foundational understanding of our lore and what is canon within our realm. Feel free to apply again at any time with the following changes in mind:

    • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

    • Your Character Biography contains an invalid lore. Characters cannot apply as dragons, and the soul  breaking you are describing, does not exist here.

    • Your Metagaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

    • Your Powergaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

    • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

    • Your character is too old, they cannot be older than 100. 

    • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think about topics such as how they react around new people, or how they view others around them!

    • Your Character Goal is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

    • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action! It cannot be in first person.

    • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!

    • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

    • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

    For questions regarding how your application has been handled, feel free to contact me via. Forums or Discord @ Mingo#2467
     

    If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!

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    Your application has been denied at this time as the allotted editing timeframe has passed. Feel free to apply again at any time with the changes requested above! 



    If you have any questions, comments, or concerns regarding how your application has been handled- please contact me via. Forums or Discord @Mingo#2467 Feel free to apply again at any time!

     

  3. Changed Status to Under Review

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    If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!

     




    If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @Mingo#2467 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

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    Your application has been denied as you have indicated you have not read the rules. This is a core part of the server's experience and it is critical all players know and abide by, the rules. Please apply again at any time after you have familiarized yourself with our server policies, as well as the changes requested above. 

  5. Changed Status to Under Review

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    Your application has been denied at this time. Feel free to apply again at any time with the following changes:
     

    • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

    • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?

    • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

    • Your Roleplay Definition and Experience must include your definition of roleplay!

    • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

    • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

    • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

    • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!

    • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

    • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

    • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 


     

    If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!

     

     

  6. Changed Status to Under Review

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    Unfortunately your application has been denied at this time. Feel free to apply again at any time with the changes requested. 
     

    • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

    • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?

    • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

    • Your Roleplay Definition and Experience must include whether or not you've roleplayed before!

    • Your Roleplay Definition and Experience must include your definition of roleplay!

    • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

    • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

    • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

    • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!

    • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

    • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

    • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 


     

    If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!

     

  7. Changed Status to Under Review

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    Your application has been denied at this time. Feel free to read through the corrections needed below. You may apply again at any time with the corrections suggested!
     

    • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

    • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?

    • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

    • Your Roleplay Definition and Experience must include whether or not you've roleplayed before!

    • Your Roleplay Definition and Experience must include your definition of roleplay!

    • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

    • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

    • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

    • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!

    • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

    • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

    • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 


     

    If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!

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    Congratulations, you’ve been accepted! Welcome to Lord of the Craft!

     

    Now that you’re accepted, you will spawn in Cloud Temple as a player and be able to interact with the world around you. If you need any help, you can message me in game by doing /msg Pomplemousse or if I’m not online, you can find me on discord @Mingo#2467. Lastly, if you need any guidance in-game, and I am not around, please do /creq along with a message as to what you need, and another Community Team Member will get to you as soon as possible!

     

    After reading the below information and logging into LotC, I highly recommend sending this in chat so a Community Team Member can help you out:

     

    /creq I have just been accepted and would like a Wilven Monk!

     

    When joining, the bot may be down that normally automatically whitelists you after the acceptance of your application. If this should happen, please go into the wandering soul channel (#ws) and ask for a Community Team Member to accept you!

     

    I highly recommend you join the LotC discord using the invite link below, and please look through the New Player Hub!

     

    In addition, I recommend taking a look at our Settlement Guides. Below, I’ve linked the settlements you may be interested in based on your character’s biography!

     

    If you aren’t interested in any of those, take a look at our Settlement Guide Hub!

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    • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

    • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

      If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @Mingo#2467 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 
       

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    Congratulations, you’ve been accepted! Welcome to Lord of the Craft!

     

    Now that you’re accepted, you will spawn in Cloud Temple as a player and be able to interact with the world around you. If you need any help, you can message me in game by doing /msg Pomplemousse or if I’m not online, you can find me on discord @Mingo#2467. Lastly, if you need any guidance in-game, and I am not around, please do /creq along with a message as to what you need, and another Community Team Member will get to you as soon as possible!

     

    After reading the below information and logging into LotC, I highly recommend sending this in chat so a Community Team Member can help you out:

     

    /creq I have just been accepted and would like a Wilven Monk!

     

    When joining, the bot may be down that normally automatically whitelists you after the acceptance of your application. If this should happen, please go into the wandering soul channel (#ws) and ask for a Community Team Member to accept you!

     

    I highly recommend you join the LotC discord using the invite link below, and please look through the New Player Hub!

     

    In addition, I recommend taking a look at our Settlement Guides. Below, I’ve linked the settlements you may be interested in based on your character’s biography!

     

    If you aren’t interested in any of those, take a look at our Settlement Guide Hub!

  11. Changed Status to Under Review

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    • If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @Mingo#2467 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions.
       

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