Maiavel

Wow. Just.. Wow.

I can't even really think of where to start. I take one day to enjoy practicing a new pattern ( I knit), to clean a bit around the house, enjoy time with my husband, and I sit down at my computer to find all of 'this'.

I came to LoTC to find a fun roleplay experience, not all of this drama. The months that I played I devoted quite a bit of my time to various things in order to help them develop into something more, and quite a bit of it got thrown in my face. I was fine with it, so long as the people I did the work for benefited from that work. They did, so far as I know.

I wont, however, stand around and pretend that the treatment I've seen bestowed on my friends is 'okay'. It's horrible, disappointing, wrong... I just... I'm done.

Denied.

Your biography is a bit too short, and could use just a bit of character depth and development.

Some of your 'In Character' answers were inconsistent with each other.

You need to provide a picture of your character skin.

Please take this time to polish your application before resubmitting.

Denied.

You did not use the proper application, or format.

You did not provide proper answers to any of the questions.

You did not provide a screenshot of your character.

Please take this time to polish your application before resubmitting.

Denied.

Your application is quite sparse, as a whole. Expand on your answers, especially your biography. Also, the screenshot provided is much too small to tell what is in the picture. Please provide an appropriately sized image.

Please take this time to polish your application before resubmitting.

Denied.

You submitted two applications within a two day time frame. You may only submit one application per 48 hours.

Your application is riddled with spelling and grammar errors. Take time to proof read your application, and make appropriate corrections, before reposting.

Please take this time to polish your application before resubmitting.

Denied.

You resubmitted your original application that was already denied. Properly edit your application before resubmitting.

Denied.

You must provide a screenshot of your character skin.

Please take this time to polish your application before resubmitting.

Accepted!

It may take a bit for your status to be upgraded in game. We appreciate your patience during this time.

As a suggestion, you may want to edit your skin a little bit. The picture provided looks a little like a priest of some sort, instead of an adventurer with a hat and a rope :wink: .

Welcome to Aegis, and may your days be blessed with Adventure!

Accepted!

It may take a bit for a GM to upgrade your status in game, and we appreciate your patience during this time.

Welcome to Aegis, and may your days be blessed with adventure!

Denied.

You must provide a proper screenshot of your character.

Take some time to expand on your biography.

Determine which of your provided account names is connected to your forum account, and provide that one in your application. If you have more than one forum account, for whatever reason, choose a primary account.

Handy Hint: If you're unsure about the spelling of a particular word, google search it. :3

Please take this time to polish your application before resubmitting.

Denied.

You need to provide a picture of your character skin.

Your biography, and character development, may benefit from taking a closer look at the orc related lore.

Please take this time to polish your application before resubmitting.

Denied.

Expand on your biography, and your 'In Character' section in general.

Provide a screenshot of your character.

Please take this time to polish your application before resubmitting.

Denied.

Your 'In Character' section could use more depth, development, and expansion in general.

Do not swear in your application. This includes any purposely mistyped versions of swear words.

Please take this time to polish your application before resubmitting.

Denied.

Please properly fill out the questions on the form.

Provide an actual screenshot of your character, not the texture file.

Work on your biography by adding more character depth, and development.

Please take this time to polish your application before resubmitting.

Denied.

Format your application properly.

Expand on your answers to the questions, especially the 'In Character' section of the application.

Provide a screenshot of your character.

Work a little on the depth, and development of your character's biography.

Please take this time to polish your application before resubmitting.

Denied.

Please answer the questions correctly.

Your biography needs depth, and a little more character development.

Please take this time to polish your application before resubmitting.

Denied.

Fill out the form properly.

Please take this time to polish your application before resubmitting.

Denied.

Properly answer the questions and fill out the form.

Write a biography.

Submit an actual picture of your character, not the texture file.

Please take this time to polish your application before resubmitting.

Denied.

Use the proper application form.

Correct your grammar and spelling.

Submit a screenshot of your character.

Work on your biography. This would involved adding more depth, and development, to your character.

Please take this time to polish your application before resubmitting.

Denied.

Your biography needs just a bit of work, and character development. Also, please provide an actual picture/screenshot of your character, not the texture file.

Please take this time to polish your application before resubmitting.

Denied.

Your biography could use a bit more in the way of character development and depth. Perhaps you could add another few decades into his story, and age, to explain this hatred towards cows o.O.

Please take this time to polish your application before resubmitting.

Denied.

To begin with, no elf in their right mind would give up their child. If you noticed in the elven lore children are exceptionally rare, and cherished. I honestly couldn't make heads or tails of your biography because of how much the thoughts jumped around, and there is no need for you to be inputting extra information within parenthesis.

Also, grammar does have quite a bit to do with one's ability to roleplay, and with one's ability to provide wholesome roleplay in encounters with other players. Being denied means one should take whatever criticism is provided and grow from it.

Please take this time to polish your application before resubmitting.

Denied.

Add more depth and character development to your biography.

Please change your character age to something more plausible within the lore of Elves. Elves younger than 100-150 are essentially considered teenagers, as well as 19 years not being enough time for your character to develop the skills in which you've described.

Submit a character skin that fits within the world of Aegis.

Please take this time to polish your application before resubmitting.

Denied.

Accepted~!

Only one suggestion, work on making your character skin a bit more unique. There is a bit of overuse of the Honeydew dwarf skin, so it may benefit the growth of your character if you customize it a bit. I understand it isn't Honeydew EXACTLY, but unfortunately it is associated with the style.

If you should need help making a skin we have many talented tailors lurking about on this server, so feel free to ask.

Welcome to the world of Aegis, and may your travels be blessed with adventure!