Butcher Pete

Metagaming is also known as powergaming. It is doing irrelevant things to your character (Ex. a crippled wizard who trained with a sword 24/7)

thanks Destroyer_Bravo i didnt know that. But i cant see any of it in my application :P

Denied.

Reasons why your application has been denied may include the following:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-You didn't include a skin link.

-Your application was too short.

-Contains elements of meta-gaming.

Okay thx for replying my application. This is exact the same what was said about my first application? i fixed it? i exent the bio. i have a link for my skin? and because Prince Mylas already said what i did wrong i have read the lore? What is Meta-Gaming? So could u please help me and explain what how i can make the perfect application. thank you very much

Hugo Huisman

-Minecraft Account Name: hugohuisman

-How old are you?: 16

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: +1 GMT

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes, im still on school on the Higher Advanced Educations for 4 years but still its not perfect. I think its because im Human :)

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I play Minecraft for quite some time and always with friends! because im a social guy. Every game is fun for me if i play it with friends, The more the merrier i always say. More about myself is that i like almost everything, i play guitar for 6 years im doing Boxing for 4 years and like Motorcycles like almost every guy .

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Well... its always different. sometimes im busy with school but i always try to put allot of time and effort in Minecraft.

-How long have you played minecraft?: I play Minecraft now for almost a year i think and i have always played it with friends.

-What do you know about roleplaying?: Well i have played allot of RP in WoW what i realy liked. its feels like another world, and the best thing is that you can decide were your character comes from and how he reacts on situations.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: Very alive and a Whole new world for me to explore. I never played on a White-list server and i hate it when you are on a nice server and there are some people who ruin it for you. So i think with this White-list system the people on this server will be very kind and generous. CANT WAIT!

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: None. I have played on Minecraft Crafters Community and QCraft. wich i realy like but are small and im looking for something new and i like lore and story so this sounded like a great idea!

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Completely. Without rules there would be no order and no balance.

-Name the 4 races on this server: Elves, Orcs, Humans, Dwarves. This is not including the subraces and Undead and Ascended.

-How did you hear about us?: I saw on the YouTube account of The Yogscast that they favorite the Lord of the Craft Trailer so i watched it and i was amazed and stuned!

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Butcher Pete

In-Character:

-Character Name: Balthazar Firenze

-What is your Race?: Human

-Biography: Balthazar Firenze born in a little house far from civilization. His mother died after she gave birth to a twin. He only had his brother father and sister now. He is searching for the murderer of his little brother and the slaver who captured his sister and made a slave out of her. The only thing he knows is that they are somewere walking free in the land of Aegis and must be punished. There is also aa mysterious elf he has seen several times in the forests of Aegis but he could never speak to her because she always disappears. He does not know if this beautiful Woman really exists or that it is his fantasy. He heard that there is an elf in living among the Humans in The Great Kingdom of Oren, so he is still searching for her.Balthazar wants to end his live of blood and searching and looks for peace and he believes that this woman can bring the peace to him. Balthazar has old memories of the two man he is looking for but the world of Aegis is big and reaching is primary goal gets harder every day.

-Character Age: 32

-Character Appearance: Dark and aggressive appearance but Balthazar is also a intelligent and smart guy. He not always solves his problems with blood. He always reacts the right way. he look strong and athletic, he also has a high agility. he pefers to wear a hat but has a few exclusion out of respect to do not. he alsways has his special sword with him called Booley what he has been gifted from his father. and like every tough guy he has a beard

-Character Personality: Silence and observing looking trough the crowd he spots danger from far and smells adventure. Only interacts when its necessary. and when it gets realy warm under his feets he takes Booley in his hands for duty.

-Your ambitions: He doesnt have much purpose in life only to find the murderer of his brother and the man who put his sister into a slave. he left his Father to find the two man and he will to return untill the deed is done. Maybe he has more luck in the world of Aegis.

-Can your character read or write?: offcourse, he knows what "WANTED!" means?

-Can your character mine?: No not very well. He has seen many dungeons and caves but dont know much about mining.

-Are you a capable builder?: Yes he has learned building from his father. His father was a proffesional builder when he was young he had worked on many cities and met his beautiful wife. but because there were problems with her they had to flet so he could protect his wife.

-Can you wield a sword?: It is the only thing Balthazar can realy rely on same with his other skils he has learned it from trusted sources or out of survival. he knows were to stikes his opponents, what the weak spots are at the chest of an Orc and range doesnt matter.

-Enjoy Farming?: No he doesnt know anything of farming. but he likes eating!

-Does your character have any special skills?: He knows every Race very well and knows how they react or judge on situations.

-A screenshot of your skin: http://www.minershoes.com/skin/view/i4e7784e677d6f21069262257831016310571085

-Other Information: Regardless if I am accepted or not. I would like to say this is an amazing server. and i appreciate your hard work to make these AMAZING servers! This is my second application, i have improved this application.

-Minecraft Account Name: hugohuisman

-How old are you?: 16

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: +1 GMT

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes, im still on school on the Higher Advanced Educations for 4 years but still its not perfect. I think its because im Human :P

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I play Minecraft for quite some time and always with friends! because im a social guy. Every game is fun for me if i play it with friends, The more the merrier i always say. More about myself is that i like almost everything, i play guitar for 6 years im doing Boxing for 4 years and like Motorcycles like almost every guy :D.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Well... its always different. sometimes im busy with school but i always try to put allot of time and effort in Minecraft.

-How long have you played minecraft?: I play Minecraft now for almost a year i think and i have always played it with friends.

-What do you know about roleplaying?: Well i have played allot of RP in WoW what i realy liked. its feels like another world, and the best thing is that you can decide were your character comes from and how he reacts on situations.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: Very alive and a Whole new world for me to explore. I never played on a White-list server and i hate it when you are on a nice server and there are some people who ruin it for you. So i think with this White-list system the people on this server will be very kind and generous. CANT WAIT! :D

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: None. I have played on Minecraft Crafters Community and QCraft. wich i realy like but are small and im looking for something new and i like lore and story so this sounded like a great idea!

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Completely. Without rules there would be no order and no balance.

-Name the 4 races on this server: Elves, Orcs, Humans, Dwarves. This is not including the subraces and Undead and Ascended.

-How did you hear about us?: I saw on the YouTube account of The Yogscast that they favorite the Lord of the Craft Trailer so i watched it and i was amazed and stuned!

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Butcher Pete

In-Character:

-Character Name: Balthazar Firenze

-What is your Race?: Human Northerner

-Biography: Balthazar Firenze born in a little house far from civilization. His mother died after she gave birth to a twin. He only had his brother father and sister now.

-Character Age: 32

-Character Appearance: Dark and aggressive appearance but Balthazar is also a intelligent and smart guy. He not always solves his problems with blood. He always reacts the right way. he look strong and athletic, he also has a high agility. he pefers to wear a hat but has a few exclusion out of respect to do not. he alsways has his special sword with him called Booley what he has been gifted from his father. and like every tough guy he has a beard :P

-Character Personality: Silence and observing looking trough the crowd he spots danger from far and smells adventure. Only interacts when its necessary. and when it gets realy warm under his feets he takes Booley in his hands for duty.

-Your ambitions: He doesnt have much purpose in life only to find the murderer of his brother and the man who put his sister into a slave. he left his Father to find the two man and he will to return untill the deed is done. Maybe he has more luck in the world of Aegis.

-Can your character read or write?: offcourse, he knows what "WANTED!" means?

-Can your character mine?: Yes very well indeed. he teached him self Mining to Survive.

-Are you a capable builder?: Yes he has learned building from his father. His father was a proffesional builder when he was young he had worked on many cities and met his beautiful wife. but because there were problems with her they had to flet so he could protect his wife.

-Can you wield a sword?: It is the only thing Balthazar can realy rely on same with his other skils he has learned it from trusted sources or out of survival. he knows were to stikes his opponents, what the weak spots are at the chest of an Orc and range doesnt matter.

-Enjoy Farming?: No he doesnt know anything of farming. but he likes eating!

-Does your character have any special skills?: He knows every Race very well can speak the language a bit and know how they react or judge on situations.

-A screenshot of your skin: http://www.minershoes.com/skin/view/i4e7784e677d6f21069262257831016310571085

-Other Information: Regardless if I am accepted or not. I would like to say this is an amazing server. and i appreciate your hard work to make these AMAZING servers!