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    You may reapply in 24 hours time. If you apply before this time you will be denied instantly.

     

    Reasons for Denial;

    Your biography lacks sufficient lore to be accepted into this server! Be sure to check the wiki or the Forum Roleplay section for your appropriate race and subrace.

     

    Other than that it was a good second attempt, although do remember to LINK to your past denied application in your next application as well as making sure that you have posted your application on the Minecraft Forums as this is key!

     

    If you have any further questions do not hesitate in sending me a message on the forums!

  2. DeniedApplication3V2.png

    You may reapply in 24 hours time. If you apply before this time you will be denied instantly.

     

    Reasons for Denial;

    You must use the full and correct application format; available HERE. Make sure you pick the application under the race you are applying for!

     

    If you have any further questions do not hesitate in sending me a message on the forums!

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    You may reapply in 24 hours time. If you apply before this time you will be denied instantly.

     

    Reasons for Denial;

    I fear your biography contains no server lore whatsoever. If you wish to have a chance of being accepted, this is vital.

     

    Your character seems to show no signs of any weakness anywhere. Not in your description and not in your ORQs. I would class him a little powergamey as he seems to have a high expertise in multiple things.

     

    Finally, I wish for you to expand your ORQs further, and remove the small bits of powergaming that are scattered in them.

     

    If you have any further questions do not hesitate in sending me a message on the forums and Good luck!

  4. DeniedApplication3V2.png

    You may reapply in 24 hours time. If you apply before this time you will be denied instantly.

     

    Reasons for Denial;

    You must use the full and correct application format; available HERE. Make sure you pick the application under the race you are applying for!

     

    If you have any further questions do not hesitate in sending me a message on the forums!

  5. DeniedApplication3V2.png

    You may reapply in 24 hours time. If you apply before this time you will be denied instantly.

     

    Reasons for Denial;

    You must use the full and correct application format; available HERE. Make sure you pick the application under the race you are applying for!

     

    If you have any further questions do not hesitate in sending me a message on the forums!

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    You may reapply in 24 hours time. If you apply before this time you will be denied instantly.

     

    Reasons for Denial;

    Your definitions are all incorrect , and need to be longer with examples. You may search the internet to aid your definition, but plagiarism is not allowed.

     

    I enjoyed the idea of an Orcish cook rather than a fighter, but I think your biography still needs a little more work; it must be longer, maybe a paragraph or two, and it must contain enough server lore to be accepted. Improve the biography and add enough lore and you will be on your way.

     

    I think that if your Orc is mainly an expert cook, that he should probably be weaker than the other orcs, simply because he spends less time klomping than the rest.

     

    I liked your ORQs (Open Response Questions) but they are far too short for my liking. Expand them a little more and you will be sorted!

     

    If you have any further questions do not hesitate in sending me a message on the forums!

  7. DeniedApplication3V2.png

    You may reapply in 24 hours time. If you apply before this time you will be denied instantly.

     

    Reasons for Denial;

    You must use the full and correct application format; available HERE. Make sure you pick the application under the race you are applying for!

     

    If you have any further questions do not hesitate in sending me a message on the forums!

  8. DeniedApplication3V2.png

    You may reapply in 24 hours time. If you apply before this time you will be denied instantly.

     

    Reasons for Denial;

    You must use the full and correct application format; available HERE. Make sure you pick the application under the race you are applying for!

     

    If you have any further questions do not hesitate in sending me a message on the forums!

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