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SadisticSavant

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  1. On 7/3/2016 at 5:55 PM, someone cool said:

    I think you should add subtypes to the creature, like Pale is one what about like 2 more? 3 subtypes?

    Second comment ever, I'm actually going to address a quick thing that I think most people aren't getting? If anyone, I think we didn't explain it fully in the description, Axolotyn, (Name subject to change if enough people think a different name would be better,) Vary wildly in appearance. It's one of their little quirks, the reason they don't really have subspecies is because they're all different enough as it is. One might look more humanoid with some fishy traits, one might look more frog-like, hell one might even look like a crocodile to a degree. They vary quite a bit, kind of....flexible genetic structure I suppose. Part of the allure I was aiming for was the customization. Want to look like a fishman? Go ahead, just keep it within the limits of the Axolotyns universal traits. want to be Tahm Kench? Also viable. want to be an argonian? No feathers but sure. I was going for the opposite of the Kha's, "We have four variations and they're all extremely restrictive have fun!" Post Scriptum, thank you all so much for the support, I'm actually ecstatic that so many people like this race, (Though there are a few not-quite haters but I appreciate criticism too so,) Thank you all, etc etc.

  2. On 7/3/2016 at 2:21 PM, _Jandy_ said:

    This is one of the best creature proposals I think I have ever seen, it is incredibly well planned out and I think it could find a great niche in the server. The only thing I would change is the name because it is a very direct reference to the animal it is inspired by and I would also change the races origin because it seems way too similar to the Kha. Perhaps also they have their own belief system to an aengul or daemon and they have their own type of diety magic though and the priests and priestesses are granted the gift of being able to stay under water indefinitely, I fear that if that is left as a genetic trait then too many of the players will simply choose to have the trait. Also I think that the clothing and fashion ideas could stand to take some new ideas from some creative people, but in all this race seems very fun and different than the current races that we have. So it has my full support!

    Hi, first time actually commenting, this race is mostly my brainchild, and in my defense I did not think of the origin. That one was suggested by my co-creator so that people wouldn't flip out that they evolved naturally. Secondly, they do not have priests or priestesses as religion is more of a personal choice for them, and thirdly the ones that stay underwater indefinitely also have a whole buttload of other negative traits to keep it somewhat balanced. I apologize if this seems like I'm agitated I promise I'm not it's just the way I talk XD As for clothing and fashion, I do agree, but fabric is hard for amphibious races >.> Thank you for your criticism, thoughts, and support ^w^

  3. Fliers are posted around the cloud temple and capital

                                    cities                                       

     

    Looking for a nice spot of land, within a city. To build a stables, anyone with

    information or wishing to make a deal contact Alarica Diari ((EmoGuyGothic))

    either through a letter (( Fourm Reply)) or a bird (( In game /msg)) 

     

    The letter is signed with a neat signature reading "Alarica"

  4. Out-Of-Character Information
    Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, 
    this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!
     
    What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: ivoryraven14
    How old are you?: 16
    Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes.
    Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/119720-pending-ivoryraven14s-application/
    Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Indeed
    What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The combative and PvP rules most likely. 
    I've had to deal with being attacked in PvP while trying to RP too many times to not appreciate it.
    Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?
    (If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):Nope
    How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: A friend
     
    Definitions
    Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!
     
    What is roleplaying?: Stepping into the shoes, and immersing yourself in the life, or undeath, of a character of your creation, acting, thinking, and living like they would. 
    or rather like they do.
    What is metagaming?::Making use of knowledge gained or deduced outside of RP or IC, 
    such as a friend telling you about their character getting stabbed in the leg, and then having your character notice a limp that they hadn't revealed IC.
    What is powergaming?::Something I try to avoid -.- but to be more specific, it is the act of "forcing" role-play, not giving your RP partner a chance to reply properly, ]
    such as backhanding someone rather then attempting to backhand someone.
     
    In-Character Information
     
    Character’s name: Kali Nalla
    Character’s gender: Female
    Character’s race: Human
    Character’s age: 20
    Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):
    Kali lives on the outskirts of the city of petrus. Her family owns a farm, that she's worked on since she was young. She's spent much of her
    time on the farm, or within the city's walls, selling her goods. All the money she makes goes towards her parents medication becasuse they are ill.  
    When her parents were doing better, she wanted to leave the family home and wandered down to the halfling village Gimblewood, to attend
    the gaming festival. She made a few friends there, one being a woman named Alarica Diari, they became good friends. Later Kali brought Alarica
    to her family's farm, Alarica noticed that Kali didn't spend much time away from home. She asked her parents if she could take Kali on a trip to visit 
    some of  the cities that are close to the city of Petrus. With Kali's parents permission Alarica took her to visit the cities, along with bringing her to the 
    Viridian pub, where she works. Kali ordered a few drinks, and had a fun time, before walking to Alarica's house in the drood city. A few days
    later Kali and Alarica ended up in the city of Annil'sul the elven capital, Kali wandered around the city, looking at local shops, and stopping to buy 
    a meal or two from some taverns. Kali told Alarica that she wished to go home, so Alarica packed their stuff, and started to walk home, again 
    stoppping at the Viridian pub, and Alarica's house in the drood city. As they neared Petrus, the smell of smoke filled their noses, the closer  they got
    the more noticable something was wrong. Soon Kali broke into a sprint, as she worried for her parents lives. When she got close she noticed
    a bright light coming form the city, she ran to her parents farm to see that most of their home was burned down. She ran over to look through the 
    rubble for her parents, but found her mother sitting against a stone wall, crying. Her mother explained what happened that a group of cultist attacked 
    and that her father attempted to fight them off, but died in the fight. 
    Kali fell to her knees crying, laying her head against her mothers shoulder, Alarica standing behind them, her face full of anger. Kali's later 
    since moved in with Alarica. She begged for Alarica to train her, as Alarica was apart of a guild known as "Sword Invictus". Alarica agreed, as long as 
    Kali promised to never fight unless threatened. Kali's mother remained wthin the city of Petrus, helping those who lost loved ones or homes, but later 
    died of sickness, as she had no money to buy her medication.Kali later went back to the city of Petrus, to find the king handed it over to
    the rebels, her anger boiled deep within, as she swore to one day fight with the last group willing to stand up, and take her city back.
    (( Links to some of the guilds/Events that were mentioned)) 
    (( Alarica Diari = EmoGuyGothic))
     
    Personality Traits: She cares for nature, and her friends and family. She hates to see someone or something in pain. She's calm and collected
    And very down to earth, she has been looking into becoming a druid for quite sometime, but is worried it won't fit her well.
    Ambitions: To one day take back Petrus.
    Strengths/Talents: She's a experienced tailor. she's spent her early years of her life, working on her family's farm.
    Weaknesses/Inabilities: She's affraid to fight, and if she does fight she tends to surrender, but wishes to over come this fear with the help of Alarica.
    Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Long black hair. dark blue eyes. she's 5" 10 and is 157 pounds. 
    her eye's sometime, in the correct light, seem to become a lighter shade of blue.
    Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):ZCUvwJZ.png
  5.  

    Out-Of-Character Information

    Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

     

    What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: ivoryraven14

    How old are you?: 16

    Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes

    Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):Nope

    Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Indeed I have :D

    What’s the rule you agree with the most?:The combative and PvP rules most likely. I've had to deal with being attacked in PvP while trying to RP too many times to not appreciate it.

    Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): Nope.

    How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? A friend 


    Definitions

    Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

     

    What is roleplaying?: Stepping into the shoes, and immersing yourself in the life, or undeath, of a character of your creation, acting, thinking, and living like they would. or rather like they do.

    What is metagaming?:Making use of knowledge gained or deduced outside of RP or IC, such as a friend telling you about their character getting stabbed in the leg, and then having your character notice a limp that they hadn't revealed IC.

    What is powergaming?:Something I try to avoid -.- but to be more specific, it is the act of "forcing" role-play, not giving your RP partner a chance to reply properly, such as backhanding someone rather then attempting to backhand someone.

     

    In-Character Information


    Character’s name:Cecyl Crowne

    Character’s gender:Male. (Commonly mistaken for female)

    Character’s race:High Elf, "Possible" Dark elf heritage.

    Character’s age:93

    Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):Found as little more than a newborn by a wealthy, elderly human couple taking a walk through their private garden, they searched the grounds and the city of Malinor, the couples house being on the outskirts of the city. Becoming increasingly worried about what they would do if they couldn't find the true parents, or parent of this pale skinned child with pink eyes and a black blanket......eventually they decided to take it upon themselves, and took him under their wing, somewhat looking forward to it as they'd yet to have a child, as the woman was barren, much to their grief. As the boy grew his startling intelligence and..."Eccentric" personality revealed themselves rather quickly, the child always giggling at the misfortune of servants, animals and his parents alike, though he always apologized shyly for the latter......at the age of five he taught himself  how to although he couldn't read everything, he could read somethings such as titles to some books, and some simple words startling his adoptive mother when she tried to sit him down on her lap to read him a story when he squinted and read the title aloud before smiling and telling her it sounded nice. At the age of six it became rather obvious that no one would suspect the darling child of being male, his hair, skin and voice softer than even most other little girls his age, his large pink eyes are adorable pillowy lips denying his true gender even further.....even his frame being remarkably slight for a boy his age, even an elf.......and as he didn't seem to mind the pair never corrected those guests, meaning all of them, Who assumed him to be female.....two years later his love of the mechanical manifested with a fury, locking himself in his room for hours at a time, often times being up the next morning when his parents came to wake him, tinkering, studying, researching all things mechanized.....his obsession made his parents worry somewhat though they knew he was a bright child and left him alone. At ten he regularly wore skirts, dresses, bows & ribbons, making his parents chuckle as they weren't worried in the slightest....if he wanted to dress as a girl he could. not as if it could bring any embarrassment to them anyways, considering that not a single person had assumed he was a boy in his lifetime...at the age of twelve he truly did give them a shock, walking in with bright, turquoise/blue hair and announcing his didn't like girls, before smiling and walking out with a hop in his step......On his 18nth Birthday his adoptive parents, the ones who had raised him like their own child for his entire life passed away with a smile on their lips, happy to see him grow into the beautiful child he was now......as they slipped away though he didn't cry, but simply smiled, happy to see them happy on his birthday.....and decided to honor them by keeping the house well, banishing the servants and keeping it clean on his own in the years to come....he stayed in that mansion for the next 60 years of his life, the halls, the empty rooms, even the kitchen and dinning room eventually filling with his many creations, machines made for no other reason than to sate the young inventors curiosity, his formerly bright blue hair faded, permanently stained from the constant redyes until he forgot about it.....but eventually....he grew bored....he didn't have any more inspiration, as imaginative and brilliant as the lone artist was, he was too bored to continue.....and it was that realization that spurred him to leave his home for the past 72 years, packing only a pouch filled with various clothes, both male and female, and a book filled with past designs, drawings, and his only memories of the ones who raised him.He now wanders Athera searching for someone to befriend, he's searched the Elven

    state of Laureh'lin but to no avail. He's wandered into the dwarven capital of Kal'Arkon and befriended a few dwarfs, but soon realized he had nothing in common with them, and left. A few years later he visited the Oren lands, and now spends most of his times there.

     

    Personality Traits:Intelligent, calculative, inventive, cruel and sadistic, Prideful and vain, temperamental at times but usually in a "smiley" mood. Rather childish at times and hates to lose, very eccentric, with an attitude usually described as mirthful or childlike/childish, Though despite these traits he can be rather shy at times, but also rather curious.....on top of this he's rather arrogant, arguably with good reason, spoiled and bratty at times, but capable of displaying surprising maturity, though should not exactly be trusted with making important decisions. Has an odd, probably unhealthy, fascination bordering on obsession, with  all things mechanical. Bipolar. Adores the color pink, as well as any other bright colors. Loves explosions. Enjoys chess. Unphased by death.

    Ambitions:He has little care nor ambition to do anything in particular besides create. The only thing that matters to him are his creations, going from Mirthful to vicious in an instant if they're threatened.

    Strengths/Talents: Brilliant engineer/tinker, easily matching trained engineers of dwarven and goblin society, though his eccentric nature and possible lack of sanity cause his mechanations to explode occasionally. One of his specific weaknesses is his over attatchment to his creations, becoming incredibly protective of them when they're threatened, though in some situations this can become a strength as it will encourage him to fight far harder than any attacker would expect. Gifted strategist, though has little care for true strategy in battle, prefering games of thought such as chess. Very slightly built, more petite than most women, which along with his youthful, and rather feminine appearance, causes most to not take him too seriously, and even take "advantage" of him depending on the kind of person they are.....suffers from occasional head aches, often times from lack of sleep and food. Physically weak, unable to lift anything weightier then a heavy weapon such as an axe or a longsword, though he's  remarkably quick, capable of avoiding most attacks from an attacker, even dodging arrows he sees, or hears coming. Decent archer though mostly due to his gift for calculation, predicting the arc and trajectory of any projectiles, even an enemies with relative ease.

    Weaknesses/Inabilities:^^^^ (Explained Above)

    Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):Looks a tad younger than most high elves, more inbetween the sixteen and nineteen range of appearance. Redish pink eyes, though not enough red to guarantee dark elf heritage. Intense turquoise/blue hair, very soft, even silk like to the touch, natural hair color unknown as its always dyed, to the point where even if it's washed out his hair will simply become a more faded blue as its become permanently stained. Very pale, very slender frame with rather narrow shoulders and slightly wider hips in comparison to another male his size, along with androgynous, if not rather feminine features, causing many to assume he's female, though those who look past base appearances will likely be able to see the truth.

    Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): 

    IaK33RO.png

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