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Out-Of-Character Information
Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!
What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: MineCatFTW
How old are you?: 13 Years old
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes I am aware
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Cyber bullying
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? From a friend
Definitions
FeelFREE to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!
What is roleplaying?: When someone acts or pretends to play as a certain character or person that they are not.
What is metagaming?: When you get information out of character and use it in a game.
What is powergaming?: Where you can have goals within game, or like role-playing, you can do storytelling too.
In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.
Character’s name: Alianor
Character’s sex: Female
Character’s race: Human (Heartlander)
Character’s age: 8 then later on in the story 17-33 years old
Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):
It was cold and damp in Felsen, all of the markets were slowly getting empty. Alianor was the only one around. She was new to this region, she was all alone. She had come from Salvus. Alianor's parents and sister were killed along with her grandmother by Dwarves. She was happy there, she had everything she wanted: family, friends, hope and happiness. Now it was all gone.
"Hey you there!" Called a man
Alianor turned to look at whoever was calling for her. She scanned the area only to find a similar looking face. Who was he?
"Alianor is that you? What are you doing here all by yourself?"
"Grandpa?", Alianor was shocked "Grandpa is that really you?"
"Alianor my girl, it's been a while, how is your mother and father doing? How's my wife? Oh and your little sister?" He was excited to find out about Salvus since he hasn't been there in ten years since he had to stay and work as a blacksmith. Though Alianor didn't answer any of his questions, how could she?
"Alianor dear, what's wrong?" Grandpa was getting concerned.
"T...They...A...are...all...d...de..dead" Alianor's eyes started watering up, "The Dwarves took them all, THEY KILLED MY MOTHER AND FATHER!", Alianor looked at her grandfather " You could train me! I want to revenge them, I'll train hard everyday, just teach me!....Please" Alianor fell to her knees, and started to beg,"Please grandpa, please, PLEASE!"
"I can't, I don't want to loose you, you are the only family I have left, I can't let you do this"
"Don't you want revenge? Don't you hate them? What is wrong with you?"
Alianor's grandfather looked into her eyes,"Fine. I'll train you, but you are not to go on your own until you are 18. Do you hear me?"
Alianor nodded, it was a new beginning, everything will change now.
10 years later (Alianor's point of view)
"Breath in, calm down, elbow up, aim, one more deep breath and......FIRE!"
The arrow flew, piercing the air like a deadly snake. The arrow had hit the bullseye. I slowly put my arm down with the bow, eyeing my target.
"ALIANOR, GET DOWN HERE" Grandpa had called from the bottom of the mountain, "we need to talk!"
"COMING!" I answered back
I ran down the mountain where my grandfather was, and hung my bow on the fence, putting my quiver down next to it.
"What is it?"
"You are going to be eighteen in a few days and," He paused, " I don't think you're ready for this"
He said it, I knew this would happen, I trained so hard for nothing. I stared up at the clouds remembering my mother's face when she told me to run, when she told me that I should revenge her and my little sister.
"I saw my mother die, I saw my sister die, and I saw my father die, all in horrible painful deaths, and you think I will sit here with a miserable life, watching you make cheap swords all day?", I said angrily " I am ready, I trained hard for ten years, with just a bow and a couple of broken arrows, I gave my life up for this, and this is how you repay me, I am sorry but I will go there even if I end up dying, because, because I miss mom, I miss my peaceful easy life. Not this"
I picked up my bow and quiver and took grandpa's horse,climbed on and rode away, the last words I heard was "I'M SORRY ALIANOR, PLEASE FORGIVE ME!"
That was the last thing I remembered grandpa say before he died fifteen years ago, now I am thirty three years old, with no dreams, no weapons and no money or a horse, I was lost. I will never be able to revenge my family like this, I also can't live my life without Salvus. I am a broken soul. I am no longer Alianor. I am a weapon. I am revenge.
Personality Traits: Sometimes she can be aggressive, kind and happy.
Ambitions: She wants to revenge her family after the Dwarves killed them in Salvus, though she can't live there alone, it would be too scary for her.
Strengths/Talents: Bow and arrow
Weaknesses/Inabilities: Strategy
Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 174cm when 17-33 years old, 50kg when 17-33years old
Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://imgur.com/JxHMzy6
[Accepted] The Story Of Alianor From Salvus (Application)
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Posted · Edited by Isabella
Wrong definition for Metagaming
Out-Of-Character Information
Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!
What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: MineCatFTW
How old are you?: 13 Years old
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes I am aware
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Cyber bullying
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? From a friend
Definitions
FeelFREE
to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!
What is roleplaying?: When someone acts or pretends to play as a certain character or person that they are not.
What is metagaming?: When you get information out of character and use it in a game.
What is powergaming?: Where you can have goals within game, or like role-playing, you can do storytelling too.
In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.
Character’s name: Alianor
Character’s sex: Female
Character’s race: Human (Heartlander)
Character’s age: 8 then later on in the story 17-33 years old
Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):
It was cold and damp in Felsen, all of the markets were slowly getting empty. Alianor was the only one around. She was new to this region, she was all alone. She had come from Salvus. Alianor's parents and sister were killed along with her grandmother by Dwarves. She was happy there, she had everything she wanted: family, friends, hope and happiness. Now it was all gone.
"Hey you there!" Called a man
Alianor turned to look at whoever was calling for her. She scanned the area only to find a similar looking face. Who was he?
"Alianor is that you? What are you doing here all by yourself?"
"Grandpa?", Alianor was shocked "Grandpa is that really you?"
"Alianor my girl, it's been a while, how is your mother and father doing? How's my wife? Oh and your little sister?" He was excited to find out about Salvus since he hasn't been there in ten years since he had to stay and work as a blacksmith. Though Alianor didn't answer any of his questions, how could she?
"Alianor dear, what's wrong?" Grandpa was getting concerned.
"T...They...A...are...all...d...de..dead" Alianor's eyes started watering up, "The Dwarves took them all, THEY KILLED MY MOTHER AND FATHER!", Alianor looked at her grandfather " You could train me! I want to revenge them, I'll train hard everyday, just teach me!....Please" Alianor fell to her knees, and started to beg,"Please grandpa, please, PLEASE!"
"I can't, I don't want to loose you, you are the only family I have left, I can't let you do this"
"Don't you want revenge? Don't you hate them? What is wrong with you?"
Alianor's grandfather looked into her eyes,"Fine. I'll train you, but you are not to go on your own until you are 18. Do you hear me?"
Alianor nodded, it was a new beginning, everything will change now.
10 years later (Alianor's point of view)
"Breath in, calm down, elbow up, aim, one more deep breath and......FIRE!"
The arrow flew, piercing the air like a deadly snake. The arrow had hit the bullseye. I slowly put my arm down with the bow, eyeing my target.
"ALIANOR, GET DOWN HERE" Grandpa had called from the bottom of the mountain, "we need to talk!"
"COMING!" I answered back
I ran down the mountain where my grandfather was, and hung my bow on the fence, putting my quiver down next to it.
"What is it?"
"You are going to be eighteen in a few days and," He paused, " I don't think you're ready for this"
He said it, I knew this would happen, I trained so hard for nothing. I stared up at the clouds remembering my mother's face when she told me to run, when she told me that I should revenge her and my little sister.
"I saw my mother die, I saw my sister die, and I saw my father die, all in horrible painful deaths, and you think I will sit here with a miserable life, watching you make cheap swords all day?", I said angrily " I am ready, I trained hard for ten years, with just a bow and a couple of broken arrows, I gave my life up for this, and this is how you repay me, I am sorry but I will go there even if I end up dying, because, because I miss mom, I miss my peaceful easy life. Not this"
I picked up my bow and quiver and took grandpa's horse,climbed on and rode away, the last words I heard was "I'M SORRY ALIANOR, PLEASE FORGIVE ME!"
That was the last thing I remembered grandpa say before he died fifteen years ago, now I am thirty three years old, with no dreams, no weapons and no money or a horse, I was lost. I will never be able to revenge my family like this, I also can't live my life without Salvus. I am a broken soul. I am no longer Alianor. I am a weapon. I am revenge.
Personality Traits: Sometimes she can be aggressive, kind and happy.
Ambitions: She wants to revenge her family after the Dwarves killed them in Salvus, though she can't live there alone, it would be too scary for her.
Strengths/Talents: Bow and arrow
Weaknesses/Inabilities: Strategy
Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 174cm when 17-33 years old, 50kg when 17-33years old
Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://imgur.com/JxHMzy6