-Your definitions could still use a little work. Please provide an example of metagaming, and reword your powergaming definition. You can cut off someones arm, there just needs to be appropriate roleplay leading up to it, and you need to give them the chance to dodge/struggle/fight back.
-Your character may not apply to the server knowing any magic. You will need to do the appropriate roleplay on the server to acquire such magic.
-Please make a reference to the lore; this can be done by mentioning a place your character has grown up or visited, or an event that has impacted your character in some way. Simply mentioning 'Atlas' is not enough. Our lore can be found here.
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Hey,
Thank you for the feedback, I have made changes based upon your suggestions and hope that they are sufficient.
Riode
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Hey,
Thank you for the feedback, I have made changes based upon your suggestions and hope that they are sufficient.