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Pokemon991

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  1. 35 minutes ago, Ivoryyy_ said:

    You have lots of unrealised tropes in your character, such as being able to lift large amounts of weight easily, and overall a lot of over-powered traits. Please change this

     

    Your definitions are still too vague

     

    Disliking wheat is not a character flaw, please change this

     

     

    wat do you mean

  2. I am done

     

    I am 

    14 hours ago, Ivoryyy_ said:

    Ø  Your Metagaming & Powergaming definitions are still incorrect and too vague. Please add more info to these, and click the links I’ve provided for the best sources of info!

     

    Ø  Your biography is too short, and needs to be in full sentences. You should aim for 3-5 sentences at minimum, however to establish a character fit for roleplay we suggest at least a paragraph.

     

    Ø  Your interesting facts need to include at least one clear negative trait. Right now they are unrealistic (using a sword as a baby) and make no sense. Please edit these

      

     

    I am done with everything

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