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Ø  Please try and improve your grammar across your application so that it is easier to understand.

Ø  Your metagaming definition is correct in essence, however it is very vague and lacking in detail. Please add more to this (Maybe examples too), and refer to our LOTC Metagaming wiki page for the most correct and relevant info (Just keep in mind not to plagiarize)

Ø  Your powergaming definition does not match the server’s definition of powergaming. Please refer to our wiki page on Powergaming for the most correct and relevant info (Just keep in mind not to plagiarize). Remember to include some examples too.

Ø You must include at least one server lore reference in your character biography (other than your character’s race or family, or one of the server’s maps). This lore reference could be something like the name of the city your character was born in or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Please fix this using the wikia and forums for examples to use.

Ø  Breeding wild animals such as wolves and bears does not seem very realistic, so I would advise you to change this part of your biography.

Ø Your character cannot be able to communicate with animals or do other things of a magic or unrealistic nature. Once you have been whitelisted, you can find a magic teacher in game to learn magic.

Ø  While it is not compulsory to change this, the name ‘Wish’ doesn’t really fit an elf from the world LotC is set in.

Ø  I would recommend that you make your character’s age higher. This is not necessary, however in most elven cultures, elves aren’t considered adults until they reach the age of 50.

Ø Your skin does not fit LoTC’s medieval fantasy theme. Please find another skin that suits an elf from the LotC world. The LoTC Skin Archive on the forum is there for use and for inspiration.
 

You’re nearly there however there are a few changes that you must make to your application before you can be whitelisted. You have 24 hours to make the changes above. Once you’ve finished editing your application, shoot me a message here on the forums or through discord and I’ll take another look.

You can always check out the server wiki page for an extensive collection of server lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions. Feel free to also join our New Player Discord! Here you can ask questions to our Application Team, meet other players and view up to date roleplay opportunities.

If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /atreq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Application Team members.

It’s edited. Can u check it again ?

Ø  Your powergaming definition is partially correct, however it does not match the server’s main definition of powergaming. Please refer to our wiki page on Powergaming for the most correct and relevant info (Just keep in mind not to plagiarize).

You’re nearly there however there are a few changes that you must make to your application before you can be whitelisted. You have 24 hours to make the changes above. Once you’ve finished editing your application, shoot me a message here on the forums or through discord and I’ll take another look.

You can always check out the server wiki page for an extensive collection of server lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions. Feel free to also join our New Player Discord! Here you can ask questions to our Application Team, meet other players and view up to date roleplay opportunities.

If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /atreq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Application Team members.

Can u check it again ? 

I’m happy to be the first to welcome you to LOTC! As soon as this is posted, you should be whitelisted onto the server. Contact me or make an /atreq in game if there’s any issues with whitelisting.

Feel free to browse the wiki , and you can also join our New Player Discord, where myself and the Application team as a whole can answer any questions you might have. There, you’ll also be able to meet other server players and learn about new roleplay opportunities for all character races!

If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /atreq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Application Team members.

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