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Amrynn

By Amrynn

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: GEOFF#7298
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: reacting on information your character doesnt know but you do from out of game, for excample a discord message you recieved
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Forcing other players in a situation where they dont have a choice, giving your character abilities that make it indestructible or overpowered
    Status: Accepted

“Hello friendly sir, i do not remember we ever met, who are you if i may ask boldly?” Well i am Argonald, i do the administration of the docks and look into newcomers, i have not seen you here before?” “Well i am Amrynn and I am looking for a job in this great city that fits my skills,(points at his sword) maybe escort some traders or join the military. I am new here and still need to find my place, but i am certain it is at the top.

Character Name: Amrynn Iarvaris
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: Amrynn is strong and athlethic, 1m89 high, weighs 88 kg, dark blonde/ light brown hair, blue eyes
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AnimeWolf0080

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

  • Your Metagaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!
  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
  • You can’t have common character tropes such as your mother going killed and your father being killed by random dark elves please see the link for more info on character tropes and also dark elves
  1. https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193362-character-tropes-guide/
  2. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Dark_Elves
  • You can not go into the server knowing magic, You can express an interest in wishing to learn it. However actually knowing magic is a no go ;-;
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is Anime_Wolf#0080!

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also here is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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AnimeWolf0080

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So close! Just a few more changes!

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 
  1. https://app.grammarly.com/
  • In your bio it sates that both his mother died of a fever. What do you mean by this?
  • It looks as if a big chuck was taken out and it no longer flows as nice as it once did ❤️ ;-;

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is Anime_Wolf#0080!

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also here is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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AnimeWolf0080

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Hi there, as you can see, you have been accepted onto the server! Well done on your application, you’re doing great! So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!

To get started, I suggest going to tutorial island or do; /creq Can a Wilven come assist me?

 

Here are some links to help you start out! x3

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 If you need help, Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Anime_Wolf#0080]. I’m often online, so you can message me with /msg Hopesky123 to find me in game. If I’m not around you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : /discord.gg/fwEQA2F

You can also use /creq ingame and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way to!

Lastly, here is the new player hub, I recommend you look over it!

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

Have fun role playing! 😄

 

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