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Guimerboy

By Guimerboy

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    Discord: Guimerboy #9580
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is a knowledge from real life that the roleplaying character doesn't know at all. It's almost like a god whispering at the character ear.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is making your skills and actions godlike, ignoring another's person's armor, skills or actions. Sometimes it's not fair for everyone.
    Status: Accepted

Galliard looked at the man with a big smile, then went to shake the gentleman's hand. "Hello, sir! I didn't expect to have such a warm welcome, I came here to relax a little and make new friends. I was going to visit your bazaar, but I'm tempted to ask, who are you?" After asking, Galliard awaited the man's answer with a smile.

Character Name: Galliard Ravenpeak
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 32
Physical Description: He has brown hair and a beard, light armour, green eyes, he is athletic, 5'7'' ft, 176 lb and a scar on his left eye.
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

  • I would like you to expand a bit upon your powergaming definition, if you need to freshen up on the server used definitions, please visit this page.
     
  • Please read back over your biography to fix some grammar and spelling mistakes. I understand English is not everyone's native language, but be sure you pay close attention to spelling mistakes.
     
  • Please expand upon your personality traits/quirks section. You need to include at least one significant weakness to your character's personality.
     
  • Please make the explanation on your character's biggest fear at least two sentences long.
     
  • Please make the explanations on what your character likes and dislikes at least two sentences long, going into more detail than what you currently have.
     
  • Your roleplay scenario is too short and did not follow the guidelines. Please read the following, and adjust your scenario accordingly.
    • You’ve just stepped off of the boat in the port of a massive and fortified city. Before you lies a sprawling bazaar, with numerous shops, stalls, and seated traders selling wares to folk of all walks of life. Just as you’re about to continue walking onwards, into the market, you’re approached by a well-dressed gentleman who looks upon you with a big smile. “Welcome!” He began. “What brings you to this lovely city? Adventure? Wealth? Or some grand aspirations to elevate your place in society?”
      How do you respond?
       

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message DelfShadowLeader! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at qɹɐɯ#9406

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

  • Please rework the things your character likes and dislikes. Make sure you make both parts around two sentences long, and include an explanation as to why your character likes or dislikes these traits about himself.
  • Your roleplay scenario is still not quite what I'm looking for. Please make sure you include the following first:
    • Your scenario must have at least one piece dialogue from your character included, surrounded by quotes.
    • Your scenario must have at least one action included.
    • The actions in your scenario must be written in the third person.
    • Currently your scenario is all dialogue (but without the quotes). I would like you to change the above, so it is a fitting scenario/emote. If you have any questions, don't hesitate to contact me with the information you'll find below.

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message DelfShadowLeader! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at qɹɐɯ#9406

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

  • Your roleplay scenario is still not what I'm looking for. Please use the scenario provided to you in your application, which I will also link below. When doing so, also keep in mind you are emoting from a third person standpoint, meaning you are narrating the actions of your own character. In this case, the "you" used in your scenario would be replaced by your persona's name, he/him/etc.
              Please use the scenario below

    • You’ve just stepped off of the boat in the port of a massive and fortified city. Before you lies a sprawling bazaar, with numerous shops, stalls, and seated traders selling wares to folk of all walks of life. Just as you’re about to continue walking onwards, into the market, you’re approached by a well-dressed gentleman who looks upon you with a big smile. “Welcome!” He began. “What brings you to this lovely city? Adventure? Wealth? Or some grand aspirations to elevate your place in society?”
      How do you respond?

      Please keep the following guidelines in mind

    • Your scenario must have at least one piece dialogue from your character included, surrounded by quotes.
    • Your scenario must have at least one action included.
    • The actions in your scenario must be written in the third person.
    • Currently your scenario is all dialogue (but without the quotes). I would like you to change the above, so it is a fitting scenario/emote. If you have any questions, don't hesitate to contact me with the information you'll find below.

 

You're nearly there! Keep the above in mind when rewriting your roleplay scenario, and your application will be good to go!

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message DelfShadowLeader! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at qɹɐɯ#9406

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

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Hi there, as you can see, you have been accepted onto the server! Well done on your application, you’re doing great! So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!

To get started, I suggest doing; /creq Please can a CT monk come assist me starting out?

 

Here are some links you may find useful while starting out! :

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [qɹɐɯ#9406]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message DelfShadowLeader to find me in game. If I’m not around you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

You can also use /creq ingame and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

Lastly, For guides, tutorials, and how to request help from a CT member, please head to the New Player Hub found here: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/ 

Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forward to seeing you around in future!

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