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Karmatose
  • Rules: Yes
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    Discord: Karmatose#8234
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: While you can include your character's intent, avoid stating the conclusion or result of a character's action, especially when that conclusion affects another player's character. For example, instead of "Agar punched Jacal squarely in the jaw.", try "Agar swung back his fist, glaring at Jacal as he drunkenly swung forward towards his jaw." This gives the other character a chance to react, whether that may mean dodging or stating just how badly hurt they ended up being. Conversely, a player should avoid having a character that ALWAYS manages to dodge every attack, or that seems to soak up attacks like a sponge.

    Outside of combat, an example of powergaming might be something like, "Agar stared Jacal down, intimidating him into submission." This ASSUMES that the other character is intimidated. Instead, try "Agar stared Jacal down, crossing his hulking arms over his chest and breathing the foul stench of alcohol into his face." This creates a situation in which it is clear that intimidation is being attempted, without assuming that it succeeded.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Using meta knowledge can be as simple as knowing a character's name before your character is told their name, or as complex as having another player tell you OOCly that a third player has an item you've been searching for in a chest in their house, and then going to steal said item from their chest. In the former case, it is mostly just immersion-breaking, and as immersion is very important to roleplay, this is a big no-no. Moreover, knowing information like a character's name before being told can also be bad if your character knows the other character by name, but not by face (for example, if a pair of masked men mugged your character and his buddy said his name before they knocked your character out, and then you recognized that character before being told their name. Also notably, if your character had been knocked out before they said his name, recognizing his name when it is told to you would also be considered metagaming as your character was unconscious at the time it was stated).
    Status: Accepted

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

 

TW: Child abuse, Alcoholism.

 

For a moment, Jacal could only stare blankly at the stranger. He'd had the surreal sensation that he'd been walking through a dream - after all, where else would the ground be so soggy as to sink beneath his feet, and the air so stifling as to almost seem to stick to his skin? To him, it seemed as if this was something that could only happen in the realm of his subconscious, such an impossibility it was. 

 

When he finally broke out of his stupor, he glanced this way and that, before turning back towards the old woman, green eyes widening. "M-me?" He questioned, pointing a finger at his chest. "O-oh...You were expecting me?" His brain seemed to slowly catch up to the conversation, and he blinked, his face warming slightly. "You...w-want to know my story? Mine?" He didn't wait for confirmation, eagerly taking a seat, "No one's e-ever asked my story b-before! What d-do you w-want to know first?" He paused briefly, his nose wrinkling in thought. "Oo-ooh! W-why not start a-at the beginning?!" He grinned proudly at this decision.

 

"My e-earliest memory is of Jussa - my father, although h-he never liked it when I c-called him 'Daddy'. H-he said it was t-too whiny, so I had to call him 'Jussa'. That's his name, of course! He wouldn't a-ask me to call him something r-random, t-that'd be stupid!" He huffed. "A-anyway, Jussa was a-asleep on the couch after a l-long day of hunting for the both of us. He'd t-told me not to disturb him, b-but I was real lonely, so I s-snuck in and curled up beside him. I w-was real small back then, so the both of u-us could fit on the couch, even though he was r-real big!" He smiled fondly as he recalled the memory, before his smile slowly began to dim, "B-but then I noticed he smelled real w-weird, l-like the bottled stuff t-that he kept in the pantry for disinfecting c-cuts and stuff. So, I w-woke him up... I t-thought he'd b-been hurt or something, and I w-was real w-worried, I d-didn't know you could drink the s-stuff, I swear! And...h-he got real m-mad, and he pushed m-me off the c-couch and y-yelled at me r-real l-loud...a-and..." He paused, his lower lip trembling as he stared intently at his lap, eyes wet with unshed tears.

 

"...Maybe m-my story isn't m-meant f-for t-telling f-from the beginning..." He mumbled after a moment, inhaling deeply through his nose and exhaling a steeling breath as he glanced timidly up at the stranger. "...a-anyway, J-Jussa and I lived together in a cabin out in the m-middle of n-nowhere. I'm n-not really s-sure where, I n-never left h-home, not u-until recently, and I'm s-still not really sure w-where I am! B-but...that's o-okay. I get t-to meet a-all sorts of new people and l-learn all sorts of new s-stuff! J-Jussa would t-try and take me h-hunting s-sometimes, but I w-wasn't very good a-at killing things. I always p-preferred day-dreaming about veggies instead! D-did you know that e-eggplants and tomatoes are r-related? I r-read that in a book once! J-Jussa d-didn't like it when I r-read about f-farming n' s-stuff, but s-sometimes..." He leaned in a bit conspiratorially, lowering his voice to a hushed whisper, "s-sometimes, I'd w-write i-in my journal about f-farming and e-even draw b-blueprints and stuff!" 

 

His gaze fell to his lap again, then, the eager energy in his eyes suddenly gone. "B-but...o-o-one day...J-Jussa found m-my journal, and he..." He chewed his lip anxiously, his hands flitting about in his lap with nervous energy. "...h-he tore my j-journal up, s-saying t-that my role was t-to be a hunter, w-with him, t-that i-it was too cold there to p-plant c-crops a-a-and t-that I'd n-never succeed." He ducked his head shamefully, admitting, "I w-won't lie..I cried. I c-cried a lot...but that was my d-dream! S-so...I r-ran away. I k-know s-stealing is bad, b-but...I t-took some food f-from t-the p-pantry and ran i-in the m-middle of the n-night. I k-know that m-makes me a b-bad person, but I h-had to e-eat something, j-just enough to feed me u-until I got s-someplace safe, y'know? A-and...that's h-how I ended up here."

"W-where am I, anyway?"


Character Name: Jacal Goldrun
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: A 5’5” male of a small stature and an even smaller disposition, Jacal has golden brown hair tied back in a short, messy ponytail.
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Hi there, as you can see, you have been accepted onto the server! Well done on your application, you’re doing great! So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!

To get started, I suggest going to tutorial island or do; /creq Can a Monk assist me?

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 If you need help, Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Joshua#2340]. I’m often online, so you can message me with /msg JoshBright to find me in-game. If I’m not around you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : Discord

You can also use /creq ingame and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way too!

Lastly, here is the new player hub, I recommend you look over it!

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Have fun role playing! :D

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