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keanogames
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: keanogames#5372
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: to speak of information your character is not supposed to know
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: to make your chracter be or do something that is unrealistic or unfair
    Status: Accepted

*keano stepped of the boat almost tripping over some hook on the ground but then just cathing himself with his other foor while offering a handshake* it is indeed adventure that is seek, do you happen to know any good places to stay perhaps.

 


Character Name: keano Reyleth
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: around 175 cm, blond medium lenght hair, light blue eyes, pretty muscular, wears a dark open robe with a grey shirt and he weights around 50 kg
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
  • Your Character Biography features a common character trope! Please change that.
  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good.
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks and one action.
  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

 

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Have you finished editing your application or you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Melpomenne

For a faster reply, add me on discord @ minty#8400

If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.


 

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Hello- As you can see, you’ve done a great job on your application and have been accepted onto the server! So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!

 

Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Melpomenne

For a faster reply, add me on discord @ minty#8400

 

Here are some links you may find useful while starting out:

 

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If you wish for guidance while settling in, I suggest doing: /creq Can a CT monk come assist me starting out? and I or another CT member will be there to assist you!

If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

 

Lastly, For guides, tutorials, and how to request help from a CT member, please head to the New Player Hub found here.

 

Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forward to seeing you around in future!

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