Nalvage

Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

Ø  I'm going to commend you on an extremely detailed and well-written application. The few issues I have however are surrounding your use of magic, and the cultures/places referenced. As far as I can see, you've included a lot of information surrounding places and/or families that have not previously existed in lotc, or are outdated. I've had a lot of trouble understanding the various references you've used. If you could link me to the places in which you found these lore references, I can take another look.

Ø  You've also used magic and legends very frequently within your app, which is not allowed. You are not able to start out with any knowledge, possession or close experiences with magic and/or magical creatures. You also cannot claim to trace from any ancient/important families or houses. 

Ø  Your skin does not fit the medieval era of the server, and the idea of having purple eyes is rather unrealistic

Ø  All in all, you've written a very detailed and thrilling story, however it ultimately doesn't fit what lotc is all about. Your initial application should simply be a starting point for your character, rather than an entire and incredibly detailed recollection of their life. Roleplay is about creating stories through interactions with others, rather than just applying with an already made story.

Your application was good, but there were just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions, please refer to this when making changes. You can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Ivoryyy#8860) or by /msg Ivoryyy_ in-game. You can also /atreq on the server if you require assistance from any of us application team members!

5 hours ago, Ivoryyy_ said:

Changed Status to Pending

Thank you so much for reviewing my application ! My bad, I didn't see these in the application rules, I'll get to the necessary changes right away ! As far as references go, I used this 

as it was in the section titled Starting Locations in the Mortal Realm. I referenced some of the legends there as a base for the coven as far as acquiring magical knowledge through the same means as the exiled/hermit mage, but ultimately I created the House Einsof as more of a lineagel to give the character more connection and value to his family than I can personally write or express, but I'll correct it. I also didn't know that eye color would be a problem with the fantasy setting, and I'll edit that in the final submission, could you tell me if these edited skins might work for my character besides the eye color right now, at least the clothes? The idea is to have a hunter's coat that's sufficiently blended to the environment, I need to know if I have to simplify it.

This is the winter alternate skin, the necessary changes have been made, I believe. Tell me if I need to use this instead or another, in case the main one isn't lore-friendly.

User was successfully implemented!

Your application has been:

I'd like to commend you for an exceptional application. As someone involved heavily with the lore and events you've used, it's great to see. Welcome!

On behalf of the server and AT members I’d like to welcome you to LOTC! As soon as this is posted, you should be whitelisted onto the server. Contact me or make an /atreq if there’s any issues with whitelisting or similar.

Feel free to browse the Wiki, and you can also join our New Player Discord, which is a wonderful place where you can ask questions to our Application team,meet other server players and learn about new roleplay opportunities for all character races! The new player discord is a great help in getting you situated into our server.

I hope you enjoy your time on the server, and if you ever have any questions or need help please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Ivoryyy#8860) or by /msg Ivoryyy_ in-game. You can also /atreq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us application team members.

Happy roleplaying!