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pepsiman
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    Discord: PepsiMan#5269
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using information obtained OOC for IC roleplay.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Performing godly actions such as forcing emotes on other character or doing something clearly difficult with ease.
    Status: Accepted

Character Name: Sorn Baenevris
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 211
Physical Description: Sorn is 5'11" and weighs around 127 lbs. He's not very muscular, but he's in fair shape. He has white short hair, and amaranth (pink-ish red) eyes.
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Changed Status to Pending

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  • Your biography is great, however, I believe you’ve gotten the time frame confused. Since Sorn is 102 years old, and the current year is 1724, that means Sorn was born in 1622, in Axios. You mention the City of Vivec, which is a city in Vailor, around 1513. Please use a city that had been founded in Axios on this wiki page, or adjust your age to match the timeline. In addition, you mention that Sorn hears faint voices in his head periodically; magic or anything that doesn’t coincide with our server lore should not be included in your backstory. And remember, your biography should include two references to our server lore. You can easily access all our lore through our wiki. Try including an important event, or a town your persona has visited before.

  • Your character description is a little confusing. 5’12” isn’t the correct way to write out height, you can use 6’0” instead.

  • Your interesting facts don’t coincide with server lore. As I mentioned before, you cannot include magic or anything that alludes to that in your application.

 

Hey there pepsiman! Your application is well written and for the most part done well, with the exception of a few but minor mistakes. However, they can be fixed with a couple of tweaks and you’ll be set for being accepted onto the server! With that, you have 24 hours to make the necessary changes needed. Failing to make these changes within the allotted time will return in an automatic denial, though upon request I’ll be able to grant more time for your corrections.

 

The server wiki page has a great deal of important lore information. You can also join our New Player Discord where you can ask questions to our Community Staff, and meet other server players.

 

For future assistance and/or questions, feel free to contact me through discord at MrMineLoveDude#1404, or by issuing /msg MrMineLoveDude in-game. You can also issue /creq on the server to open a Community Staff ticket!

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Congratulations pepsiman! On behalf of the Community Team, we’d like to officially welcome you to the Lord of the Craft community. You’ll have a just a few brief moments while we get you whitelisted on the server and ready to go. Feel free to continue reading the rules or browsing the forums and/or wiki for more information or directly contact me if you prefer to!

 

If you’d like in-game guidance or assistance, feel free to contact me or any Community Team Member, and ask for a Wilven Monk, or otherwise just ask for assistance with becoming acclimated to LotC. You are encouraged to join our  New Player Discord, that is solely used for helping new players attune to our unique server, filled with many helpers and other CT members who are more than willing to help. 

 

Should you need help at any point in the future, please contact me through discord at MrMineLoveDude#1404, or by issuing /msg MrMineLoveDude in-game. You can also issue /creq on the server to open a Community Staff ticket!

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