thunder_hybrid

Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

• Your Character Biography states that Dracul was abandoned by his parents in the jungle at age 5. How did he survive? How was he able to train himself? I'd like for you to rewrite your biography to the best of your ability in order to explain and enrich Dracul's backstory with these questions in mind.

• Your Character Biography states that Dracul is loyal to the Empire, what gave him this loyalty? It seems like you suggest he's detached from civilization. What provides him the connection to society? Again, I'd like you to evaluate these questions in a biography rewrite. 

• Your Physical Description does not match your character’s race. 

• Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home 

• Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks.

• Your Character Fear Response should tie into your character’s personality traits.

• Your Roleplay Definition is a bit lacking - please make it more concise and narrow it down. Please define what roleplay means. 

• Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

  • https://app.grammarly.com/ 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message _Bueno_. If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at Zed#4474

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here 

: https://discord.gg/lotc

Hi there, as you can see, you have been accepted onto the server! Well done on your application, you’re doing great! So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!

To get started, I suggest doing; /creq Can a CT monk come assist me starting out?

Here are some links you may find useful while starting out! :

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Zed#4474]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message _Bueno_ to find me in game. If I’m not around you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! :https://discord.gg/lotc

You can also use /creq ingame and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

Lastly, For guides, tutorials, and how to request help from a CT member, please head to the New Player Hub found here: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/ 

Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forward to seeing you around in future!