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charlie09870
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: TikTok
    Discord: pareticorangutan
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: I understand that im not the main character and i'll keep my actions grounded in realism
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: It could give an advantage or disrupt roleplay and causing your or other characters to act in a way they simply would'nt
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


Example: A tear falls down my face as i say, "I and my sister where both out hunting deer and elk as we heard screams come from are village afar (idk what its called) we hurry back with our 2 bows and stone daggers as we see our home engulfed with flames and orcs outside it my sister screams and attacks the orcs telling me to run i didnt listen we thought valiantly until i hear a cry i turn to my side and my sister was stabbed in the chest she tells me to run i listen this time and now i end up here" and i slump my head into my arms  

"Oh, I just, uh…" you stutter, tensing up. You eye the crone, then back outside the tent. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…


Character Name: Charles Whitehall
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Tall Slim green eyes grey/brown hair with armour and blue chestplate and a beard which maches my hair
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!


 

-Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo

 

-Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks, or make sure to make out your actions however you see fit! 
 

-Please use a bit more actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario. This is just to ensure we know what you are doing!

When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person.




Please make these changes within 48 hours!
Once you have made the changes, message me on Discord @mockingbirdart or on the forums @MockingbirdArt

Feel free to reach out if you need help!

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.


Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

 

-Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo


-When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person.


If you need help or have any questions, feel free to message me on Discord @mockingbirdart or the forums @MockingbirdArt

 

I recommend joining LOTC's Discord, here is the link! Discord

 

Go to the New Player's category, and go to help chat. Ping @Community team saying "Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application? I'd like to try again!"

 

Here are some Links to also help you out!
 

WIKI

New Player Hub.

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