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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: rioathens61
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: I would not do it and I would be careful of the abilities I give my character
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: i will not act if i lean about something on a voice chat or video to not metagame
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


"Oh, I just, uh…" you stutter, tensing up. You eye the crone, then back outside the tent. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until… 

  1. I was born in a small village named "Raukawa village" it was small but very wealthy, as a child I was trained by my family's bow and sword master I mastered the art of combat. One day I woke up and my father sent me and my brother Jason Athens on a fishing trip to the deep sea everything was normal when we stepped on the boat but after a while of sailing i saw a huge creature in the water I walked to the edge of the boat then the boat started viciously rocking I looked at my brother Jason then  over the boat into the water as i was looking over the boat shuck really hard causing me to fall down into the water the impact made me black out. when I woke up it was night and I washed up onto shore of a island and i look over the whole island for my brother or any sign of life sadly he was no where to be found,
     
     
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Character Name: Rio Athens
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: 5,7 gold eyes 140 lb blondish white and a amour set that is a light weight steel with red cloth and a moon emblem
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

- Please include more in your response to Powergaming and Metagaming, this is to ensure that we know these terms before you go into the server. If you need help with understanding these terms, please take a look at our Wiki with an example provided. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 

 

- Include at least 6 sentences in your response to the roleplay scenario with proper periods to mark a sentence.

 

- When speaking of your character's action, remember to use 3rd person (He/him). Separate your character's action from their speech with "quotation marks" 

Example: Josh enters the tattered tent, it took a moment for his eyes to adjust. "Hello?" He would called out

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is Kaptainscarlet If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums @KaptainScarlet

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “I’m new and would like some help with my application. I got put on pending!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

- Please include more in your response to Powergaming and Metagaming, this is to ensure that we know these terms before you go into the server. If you need help with understanding these terms, please take a look at our Wiki with an example provided. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 

 

- Include at least 6 sentences in your response to the roleplay scenario with proper periods to mark a sentence.

 

- When speaking of your character's action, remember to use 3rd person (He/him). Separate your character's action from their speech with "quotation marks" 

Example: Josh enters the tattered tent, it took a moment for his eyes to adjust. "Hello?" He would called out

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

My discord is Kaptainscarlet If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums @KaptainScarlet 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application! I’d like to try again!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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