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By tony1

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: tieke007/simon#5807
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: you say someting that you do in the role play
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: it is a meta
    Status: Denied

i am on an adventure and i am searching an new city to live with my friends do you have some advice?

Character Name: tony de kerk
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 120
Physical Description: blue eyes, big man, blond hair, black shoes
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Hi! As you can see, your application has unfortunately been denied. Please check below for the detailed reasons why. 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Character Age is too old! Your character can be no younger than 18 and no older than 100. Please correct this! 

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to be purely personality! Don’t include anything physical in there, like being strong. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  •  Your Character's Fear Response should be at least two sentences in length and include a reason why. 

  • Your Character's Dislikes Response should be at least two sentences in length and include a reason why. 

  • Your Character's Likes Response should be at least two sentences in length and include a reason why. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

You can submit a new application and try again right after, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below! 

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums, my discord [ audyush#7358 ], in-game with /message audyush to find me in-game, or you can also use /creq in-game and myself or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

 

 If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here!

https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

 

Also, I would recommend that you read over the Wiki!

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