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By shadow man

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: what
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: still what
    Status: Denied

no one remember anything about his past he has no parents he can not see bad in anybody he likes everybody but he can not remember things 

Character Name: shadow man
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: man with a black hood and rope red eyes
Roleplay Scenario:

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes. idk why im here i don't remember why i'm here but nice to meet you

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Changed Status to Under Review

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!
  • Your Roleplay Definition and Experience must include whether or not you've roleplayed before!
  • Your Roleplay Definition and Experience must include your definition of roleplay!
  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think about topics such as how they react around new people, or how they view others around them!
  • Your Character Like is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's like connects with their biography!
  • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!
  • Your Character Dislike is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's dislike connects with their biography!
  • Your Character Fear, Like, and Dislike must be two sentences 
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!
  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @Chronics#7490, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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