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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    Discord: MoonCake35#7174
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Meta-Gaming where they use peoples real life knowledge to determine his or hers characters actions, in big RP servers this may be considered as cheating.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Power-Gaming is when a character gets a sense of power out of no where or forcing emotions out of no where in or out of battle which is seen as unfair, which in my opinion it is.
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

 

Arien steps back in surprise and the looks around and wonders if the man is talking to her. She realizes that he is. She goes to shake his hand. Then she says “Hi, well I'm here for Adventure I guess and by the way who are you?”.

Character Name: Aerin StarBlossom
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: Aerin had black hair with red tipped bangs, she has a red shirt and black shorts with a coat, she is 5"8.
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Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

  • Your meta and power gaming definitions could use some work. Refrence the following link and fix them.
  • In your bio, you lack two lore refrences. Please add some using the following link.
  • Also in your bio, your back story is a bit conveluted and confusing. Please rewrite it or fix it so it is an easier read. Also, please do not use the raised by wild animals trope.
  • You lack a positive trait in your personality traits. Please add one.
  • In both your skin and your physical traits, you have a red fringe on your hair. Please remove this.

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @LordScisso#5640 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the New Player Discord as well. 

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Your application has unfourtunately been denied at this time due to time, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • You have run out of time. Please Re-apply using the above fixes.

 

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord @LordScisso#5640, and I recommend you join the New Player Discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/

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