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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: ghosthunter#2144
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: 'meta' is utilizing aut of game informations to achive in game knolege
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: powergaming is the use of godly powers that are unfair to others.
    Status: Denied

'hello sir i'm new to the city,have you got a place for me to sleep tonight?, I would also like to know where i can buy som food and other objects.'.....

Character Name: Baloryx Azeas
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 150
Physical Description: high,atheltic but not massive, brown or yellow hair, some sort of tunic (white),sandals
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Fionn__TWG

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Your application has unfortunately been denied for multiple reasons, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!
  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?
  • Your Character Biography states that 'born 5 years before the orc invasion, Azeas watch his parents burn alive during an attack.' However, you have not named a specific place where the invasion took place.
  • Your Character Age is too old. You must play a character of below 100 years!
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks states 'really good at pvp'. However, this is not a valid personality trait/quirk for a roleplay character.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!
  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

 

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @FionnTWG#3845, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

 

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