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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to  reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

→ Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

→ Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

→ Your Character Biography states that your parents died when your character was a child, which is generic and does not provide much story. It also states that you went back to the unnamed village and murdered everybody, which lead to him becoming a bounty hunter. When creating a character, please try to create a rich backstory, instead of a generic one which leads to your character being a merciless killer. For example, if you wish to become a bounty hunter, you could write that as a child your family was robbed by mercenaries, and that your character felt hopeless and could not do anything against them, which drove him to train when he was older so that he could take bounties on mercenaries like the ones who had robbed his family.

→Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of quoted dialogue and one action.

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord louis.#9999. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX