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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    Discord: NediM24#2460
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: We can avoid powergaming if we don't do non-realistic actions. eg I jump from a great height and survive.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Metagaming disrupts fair roleplay by allowing someone who has learned the game out of character to gain an advantage over others.
    Status: Denied

  It all started when I was little, our village was attacked by dark elves, they burned the whole village, only I survived.

  I cried for days, I couldn't calm down, all my emotions were disturbed, I didn't know what to do. However, one day as I sat on the ruins of the village,

  a man came up to me and said: "What's your name, boy";

  -I replied with a stutter "H..Hex, Hex Ragnar."

  I talked to him about my village, how everything happened. he asked me:

  "Do you want to come with me";

  - I answered yes.

  We went to the city where he lives, it turns out that he is a martial arts trainer,

  he taught me how to fight. While I was learning how to fight, I also had practical exercises, since his city was full of evil and disgusting people, there would often be fights in which I used to often get involved. I often went with him to the pub. And so on one occasion I was sitting next to a man who was drinking a lot with , a little older man who looked very dirty, but I ignored his appearance when I asked him why he was drinking so much he answered me with, "That's all I have left, son ." - He told me, and then I asked: "And why." - I asked curiously. "You see son my whole family was killed by dark elves." - He answered with tears in his eyes. And so, sobbing, I told him about what had happened to my village, and then it was time to go home. As the years passed my teacher grew old and died on his bed of old age.

  I knew that I shouldn't waste time on emotions and then I went through various towns and villages to find a place to live...

Character Name: Hex Ragnar
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: Hex has brown eyes, his hair is short, his teeth are excellent, you can see that he takes care of them. He has a couple of scars under his uniform.
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

Hello there! It looks like you left the original prompt, please make sure to put your own story down and remove the example text! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about parents? Ect.

(The opening line “You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.” is okay to keep in)

 

Please remember to add dialogue of your character speaking! This is to ensure we know what you are doing! 

 

Your skin isn’t server appropriate. Might we be able to interest you in a skin from our skin archive? 

https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

 

 

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

Hello there! It looks like you left the original prompt, please make sure to put your own story down and remove the example text! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about parents? Ect.

(The opening line “You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.” is okay to keep in)

 

Please remember to add dialogue of your character speaking! This is to ensure we know what you are doing! 

 

Your skin isn’t server appropriate. Might we be able to interest you in a skin from our skin archive? 

https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

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