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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: players are encouraged to alter their phrasing to suggest an 'attempt' at an attack, and by allowing the opposing player to emote in response to such an attempt.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: It ruins the immersion of certain game aspects like player raids.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


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I find myself in this humble abode, surrounded by the rustic charm of this swampy town. The scent of nature fills the air, creating an intriguing atmosphere. As I explore, my attention is drawn to a worn tent, its interior dimly lit by suspended candles. Within, an elderly woman, wise and perceptive, acknowledges my presence and invites me to share my tale.

Seated upon a cushion, I, a towering figure standing at 6'5" and weighing 280lbs, possess the physical attributes of a Highland warrior. With fiery red hair and piercing green eyes, my desire to venture beyond the confines of my homeland has brought me to this very moment.

My purpose, dear elder, is to witness the wonders that lie beyond the borders of my familiar surroundings. I yearn to immerse myself in the diverse cultures, breathtaking landscapes, and captivating stories that the world has to offer. From the towering mountains to the vast oceans, I seek to broaden my horizons and gain a deeper understanding of the tapestry of humanity.

As I embark on this journey, I hope to encounter individuals who can share their wisdom and experiences, much like yourself. Your presence here, anticipating my arrival, piques my curiosity. I am eager to hear your insights and guidance, as I believe that every encounter holds the potential for growth and enlightenment.

Thus, I humbly request your indulgence, wise elder, as I recount my aspirations and eagerly await the wisdom you may impart upon me."


Character Name: Beren
Character Race: Highlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 28
Physical Description: Tall, broad, and built like and ox. 6'5" 280lbs red hair green eyes traditional highland gear
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

 However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

The roleplay scenario was made using an ChatGPT or another AI writer. Please rewrite the roleplay scenario in your own words and rectify any other problems with it.

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When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person!

 

Hello there! It looks like you left the original prompt, please make sure to put your own story down and remove the example text! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about parents? Ect.

(The opening line “You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.” is okay to keep in)

 

Please remember to add dialogue of your character speaking! This is to ensure we know what you are doing! 

 

Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks, or make sure to make out your actions however you see fit! 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

My discord is Dogged.! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums @Doggedwasupxxx.

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