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Abysster
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    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: Hunyiah#8883
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Ulrik gazed blankly, unsure if his eyes had played a trick on him.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Its essentially going god-mode. Little poverty farmer Timmy would never know that the King likes to privately read romance novels before bed unless he has seen it or heard a rumor. It makes for a character with holes in their development and it makes the story feel more forced and objective driven.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


Ulrik quietly settles upon the cushion, resting his palms on his knees before clearing his throat. "Well, ya see here ma'am, my Clan was wiped out by sickness. They sent me away, in hopes that at least one could survive. You see, I had been the only one to not fall ill." He gave a sad smile, as if trying to hide the pain present behind his orange eyes. "I stayed away for a long time and when I returned, everyone was gone. So I left. Too many memories with too many loved ones haunt those tunnels. The search for another home has not been an easy one. I have walked many leagues already. My feet grow weary and my mind yearns for companionship. It's lonely, walking alone for so long. So here I am, sitting before you in hopes that my search will be over."


Character Name: Ulrik Deepforge
Character Race: Cave Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 30
Physical Description: He has ashy grey skin, orange eyes and brown hair with a beard. He can generally be found wearing rich colors lined with gold trimming.
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!


 

-Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo



Please make these changes within 48 hours!
Once you have made the changes, message me on Discord @mockingbirdart or on the forums @MockingbirdArt

Feel free to reach out if you need help!

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.


Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

 

-Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo



If you need help or have any questions, feel free to message me on Discord @mockingbirdart or the forums @MockingbirdArt

 

I recommend joining LOTC's Discord, here is the link! Discord

 

Go to the New Player's category, and go to help chat. Ping @Community team saying "Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application? I'd like to try again!"

 

Here are some Links to also help you out!
 

WIKI

New Player Hub.

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