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Samuelle
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Samuelle#3885
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: using information during roleplaying from non roleplay related things
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Making an action during roleplay that is unrealistic in your characters capability
    Status: Denied

I come seeking adventure and investments. You see where I come from I did not have much, but I used the last of my minas to buy a ferry here. I wish to make great fortunes in money and fame.


Character Name: Leopold Windsor
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Average body, 6ft and athletic
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

 

  • Your Character Biography is a little short, please make sure it is 4-8 lines long.

 

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like. https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

 

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear.

 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of quoted dialogue and one action.

 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response must be in the 3rd person

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is Joshua#2340!

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

Also here is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your MC name is inappropriate, please change it.

 

  • Your Skin history is inappropriate. 

 

 

  • Your Character Biography is a little short, please make sure it is 4-8 lines long.

 

 

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

 

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear.

 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of quoted dialogue and one action.

 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response must be in the 3rd person

 

My discord is Joshua#2340! If you have any questions I’m happy to help!

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here are the links! 

Discord

New Player Hub

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