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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: AG-galaxi-PLAYS#6613
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: metagaming is like taking informations from irl to the game like your friend tells you on discord that he needs help and you go thats metagaming you have to interact wed him in the game to not mrtaggame
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: powergaming is ignoring efects that are apening to you in game to not powergaming you have to fell what you carecter is feling and representing it
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

Character Name: agalmy
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 24
Physical Description: my character is athletic wed big and stong arms and stong legs as well
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    Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

    Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

    Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one!

  • Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

  • Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks.

  • Your Character Name is not appropriate for LotC. Please change it!

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits.

  • Your Roleplay Definition is a bit lacking - please add more to it!

  • Please make sure to explain what caused your character to develop their fear in your Character Fear Response!

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Zed#4474]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message _Bueno_ to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! https://discord.gg/lotc

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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