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    Referral: planetminecraft.com
    Discord: hawtchoocoolate
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: I avoid powergaming by reminding myself that powergaming ruins the experiece, not just for myself, but for the people around me.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Metagaming disrupts fair roleplay because it disrupts the 'canon' of the roleplay.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


I sit down on the cushion, eying the woman carefully. "You've been expecting me?" I ask, and sigh at the lack of an answer. "I'm from a forest not far from here, but I had to flee when it was burned down by raiders. I think- I think I was the only survivor." I say, my voice shaking a bit. "I'm sorry, but who are you? You seem familiar."


Character Name: Leirin Sparksong
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: long brown hair that is tied half up, half down.about 5'4" and thin, 110 lbs. Wears greens and browns, preferring comfort over style.
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

-When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person!

Please make these changes within 48 hours!
Once you have made the changes, message me on Discord at
 
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.


Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

-When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person!

 

If you need help or have any questions, feel free to message me on Discord @mockingbirdart or the forums @MockingbirdArt

I recommend joining LOTC's Discord, here is the link! Discord

 

Go to the New Player's category, and go to help chat. Ping @Community team saying "Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application? I'd like to try again!"

 

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