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Golgathor
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: i try to stay as in my character as possibel, by knowing the limits of my mann
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: It will give spoilers to the other player that were staying focused on the lore
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


I

I lower my hood, revealing my weathered face, marked by scars and the wear of many battles. With a cautious but steady step, I approach the cushion and take a seat, the dim light of the candles casting eerie shadows around us.

"You were expecting me, you say? Then you must know I am Golgathor, a wanderer of many realms and a seeker of forgotten truths," I begin, my voice low yet carrying an air of authority.

"My journey has led me through desolate wastelands, ancient ruins, and treacherous forests. I have faced beasts both mundane and otherworldly, and I have delved into the depths of forbidden knowledge."

Leaning forward, I meet the old hag's gaze with a piercing stare, "But my path has grown murky, obscured by the veils of time and deceit. I seek guidance, a glimmer of light amidst this encroaching darkness that threatens to consume all."

I pause, the weight of my words hanging in the air. "Tell me, wise one, what secrets do you hold? What threads of destiny do you see woven into the tapestry of my existence?"


Character Name: Golgathor
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Tall, brunette guy with a convincing bead , and muscular phys. very strong and smart but doesn't value others as much, Not afraid of the dark
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

- Please re-word "forbidden knowledge" in your backstory reply, keep in mind that up until your application gets accepted you've been a background character. Meaning you would not have any knowledge related to magic and otherwise, your wording would seem to suggest otherwise or is unclear.

 

- Please DM me: Kaptainscarlet -on discord with an image on your skin if you are struggling to upload it here. You can either do file or a screenshot of the skin.

 

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is Kaptainscarlet If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums @KaptainScarlet

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “I’m new and would like some help with my application. I got put on pending!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

- Please re-word "forbidden knowledge" in your backstory reply, keep in mind that up until your application gets accepted you've been a background character. Meaning you would not have any knowledge related to magic and otherwise, your wording would seem to suggest otherwise or is unclear.

 

- Please DM me: Kaptainscarlet -on discord with an image on your skin if you are struggling to upload it here. You can either do file or a screenshot of the skin.

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is Kaptainscarlet If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums @KaptainScarlet

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application! I’d like to try again!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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