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AngelInChanel

AngelInChanel

By AngelInChanel

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: planetminecraft.com
    Discord: AngelInChanel#7024
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Meta-gaming is insider trade in short words. Using information that would be impossible or unlikely for your character to know and behave in a manner that upsets the order of natural invents.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Power-gaming is using unrealistic methods/strategies to benefit the player that goes against the character's abilities and persona.
    Status: Denied

*I stare at him puzzeled to why he would ask such a deep question* “I come here looking for the love of my life. He left me alone when I needed him the most. I came to city to buy good to continue my travels.” *Crosses her hands across her chest* “And what do I owe the pleasure for someone like you talking to someone like me? Curiosity?  Gossip? or self interest?”.

Character Name: Atheleys
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Dark brown hair & eyes, 5"7' Burgundy-purple over boddest with a beige & cream skirt covered with a lighter beige cowl. Slim but extenuated features
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Amelica

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Unfortunately, your application has been denied because it had too many errors. Here is some feedback on the aforementioned errors: 

 

  •  Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand.

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! There are many things that you can reference including but not limited to existing settlements, wars, and religions. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography states that your character studied medicine and learned to apply it. She cannot have that kind of knowledge; all such things must be learned through roleplay on the server.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks state that your character is a Catholic. Catholicism does not exist on LoTC; please look into the religions that do exist in the server universe and make adjustments accordingly.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should be in third person POV. 

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application; I am having a difficult time understanding parts of it. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

 

You may reapply at any time as long as you correct the mistakes that were pointed out above. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @amelica#8025, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/


 

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