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Anibubu

Anibubu

By Anibubu

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: Anibubu#1066
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: When someone is not folowing the rules and using real word chats to get help.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: When someo is doing godly actions to get results instantly.
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

Me: Greeting I am just a soldier in training looking on how to inprove my skills, Perhaps you know of a place or a teacher to help me in my training?

Gentleman: So I see you thriwe to become a soldier for the army, HOW WONDERFUL!, but allas i canot help you as you see i know nothing of fighitn or how to hold a sword properly, but if you are looking a teacher you might find him one next to the mud pit over there (point in the direction of mud pit) there are people wresteling for fun or to let off some steem.

Me: I see, thank you sir. I will head over there and I will not forget your help, If i ever see you again I promise to return a helping hand. Now if you excuse me I will be going.

Gentleman: Ah yes safe travels and the Best of luck to you. And i will remember your promise.

Character Name: Anibubu
Character Race: Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Hight no more then 170cm. weight atleast 80kg. Scar on right eye, eye collor brown, hair collor dark with a short beard, body would be a bit chubby.
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KaiserJacobII

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→ Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 

→ Your Physical Description states that he’s around 170 cm, which is a bit too tall for Dwarves. Most dwarves are around 104 cm - 152 cm. Please try to fit your character into that range!

 

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks states that his negative trait is that he “thinks of everything too much.” Could you clarify what this means! Is he easily distracted? Does he over think things?

 

→ Your Character Goal must include what drives your character towards that goal instead of just the goal itself!

 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!

 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response must be written from only the perspective of your own character! Do not control the actions of the man who greets them, simply respond to their first words!


After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord Kaiser Jacob II#1965. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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