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Apollymike

By Apollymike

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: apollymike#5940
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: whats that
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: what
    Status: Denied

to take over create a growing legion and to kill the weak and take in the strong

Character Name: apollyon
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: a corrupted knight fueled by the spirit of halloween wearing a mask and a jackolantern coruption on his head ect.
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help 

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Roleplay Definition is a bit lacking - please add more to it!

  • Your Physical Description needs to be purely physical! Don’t include anything personality-wise in there. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear.

  • Please make sure to explain what caused your character to develop their fear in your Character Fear Response!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of quoted dialogue and one action. 

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

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