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PhoenixOfDestiny

By PhoenixOfDestiny

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: I avoid powergaming by following the proper guidelines of the server.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: It disrupts it by taking the best part of roleplay (the ability to be anyon or anything) out of it.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))
I start telling her how I escaped from my elven town as it was destroyed I then tell her how I had to use my magic to fend of a hord of trolls thet where trying to kill me.

 

Character Name: Pyrus Obyrion
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: A green cloak, mud brown shirt light green eyes 6'1'' 125 lbs short blond hair and blue pants.
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AnimeWolf0080

Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

  • It looks like your minecraft username is misspelled or not a Java account! Please provide the corrected username! You should be able to find it by going into a single player world by hitting tab or typing in chat!
  • Please review our Wiki’s definition of Metagaming & Powergaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out.
  1. LoTC Wiki Page
  • You can also learn more about combat roleplay here! This will also explain what Metagaming & Powergaming is!
  1. LoTC Youtube page, Combat Roleplay video
  • Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you know how to use magic! Please know that you can’t learn how to use magic until you are on the server and have been accepted for at least two weeks. If you have any questions please message me!
  • Please remember to include backstory in the Back story & Roleplay Scenario! Even if your persona doesn’t talk about it.
  • Please remember to add dialogue of your character speaking! This is to ensure we know what you are doing!
  • Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks, or make sure to make out your actions however you see fit!
  1. example “Hello my name is -”
  • Please make sure to use actions in your backstory & roleplay scenario. This is just to ensure we know what you are doing!
  1. example They moved to lift the cloth door to walk into the tent
  • When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person!
  1. example He sat down, She looked around the room, they looked at the old hag and smiled
  • Hey! It looks like you don’t have a skin! Might we be able to interest you in a skin from our skin archive?
  1. https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is Anime_Wolf0080! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums @AnimeWolf0080!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “I’m new and would like some help with my application. I got put on pending!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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AnimeWolf0080

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

  • It looks like your minecraft username is misspelled or not a Java account! Please provide the corrected username! You should be able to find it by going into a single player world by hitting tab or typing in chat!
  • Please review our Wiki’s definition of Metagaming & Powergaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out.
  1. LoTC Wiki Page
  • You can also learn more about combat roleplay here! This will also explain what Metagaming & Powergaming is!
  1. LoTC Youtube page, Combat Roleplay video
  • Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you know how to use magic! Please know that you can’t learn how to use magic until you are on the server and have been accepted for at least two weeks. If you have any questions please message me!
  • Please remember to include backstory in the Back story & Roleplay Scenario! Even if your persona doesn’t talk about it.
  • Please remember to add dialogue of your character speaking! This is to ensure we know what you are doing!
  • Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks, or make sure to make out your actions however you see fit!
  1. example “Hello my name is -”
  • Please make sure to use actions in your backstory & roleplay scenario. This is just to ensure we know what you are doing!
  1. example They moved to lift the cloth door to walk into the tent
  • When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person!
  1. example He sat down, She looked around the room, they looked at the old hag and smiled
  • Hey! It looks like you don’t have a skin! Might we be able to interest you in a skin from our skin archive?
  1. https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

My discord is Anime_Wolf0080! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums @AnimeWolf0080. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application! I’d like to try again!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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