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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Youtube
    Discord: ✩ lyrist ✩#2953
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Tha player knowing more information than the character, thus taking actions that the character should not know of.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Interaction in a game with godly actions. (Ingame) Ex: Ayana pierces the heart of X.
    Status: Denied

"Well, first, I am looking for personal space, thank you." She took steps back. "And second, neither of those. I am looking for someone. Not necessarily your business, but, have you ever seen a fair skinned girl, blonde hair, blue eyes. She has a small mole under her lip. Should be around 10."

Character Name: Ayana
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: Green eyes, light silver hair, curvy. 168 cm. 75 kg. Fair skin. Wearing light clothes and a necklace around her neck.
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Hi! As you can see, your application has unfortunately been denied. Please check below for the detailed reasons why.

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Character Biography mentions real life dates such as October, April, etc. The server does not follow the same calendar dates as real life, we have our own time system! Please correct your mention of these dates! 

  • Your Character Biography mentions the Druidic Order. Your character should have no prior knowledge or experience with this as it involved magic, which can only be learned of through roleplay on the server itself. Please correct this! 

  • Your Physical Description does not match your character's race. High elves range between 5'6 to 6'6 (or 168 cm to 198 cm). Please correct this, and feel free to check out this link for more information on the high elven race on the server! 

  • Your Character's Biggest Fear response mentions a golem. Your application should have no mention of anything magical, please correct this! 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response must be written in third person. Please fix this! 

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

 

You can submit a new application and try again right after, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below! 

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums, my discord [ audyush#7358 ], in-game with /message audyush to find me in-game, or you can also use /creq in-game and myself or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

 

 If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here!

https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

 

Also, I would recommend that you read over the Wiki!

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