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Azuil23

By Azuil23

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: kei.#4724
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is when you give someone info about event etc. Out of character to someone who is roleplaying/in character.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is when you overpower your character/persona resulting in roleplaying unfairly and breaking lore.
    Status: Denied

Zeutros steps off the boat,starts looking around the stalls and different shops.He goes to market but suddenly stops and slowly takes a look at the gentleman, giving him a fearful stare,ignores him and proceeds going to the market.

Character Name: Zeutros Bertold
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: Zeutros is 6'01,he has blue eyes and silver white hair
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KaiserJacobII

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→ Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 

→ Your Character Biography mentions lore from the J. R. R. Tolkien’s novels. Although the name of Lord of the Craft sounds similar to Lord of the Rings, it exists in a world completely different to Tolkien’s world. Please remove all references to the Lord of the Rings!

 

→ Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good.

 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!


After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord Kaiser Jacob II#1965. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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