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Barend
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: .Barend#8444
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: “Barend swims to the bottom of the ocean and receives his lost locket” No human could swim to the bottom of the ocean

    “Barend lifts the tree out of the way by himself” No human can lift a tree
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Meta-Gaming is when you use OOC(Out of Character) knowledge in RP you’re sitting in a discord call and one of your friends says “Oh no I’m being captured” and you run to save him type of thing
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

 

Greetings, oh wise elder! I have arrived in this swampy town seeking wisdom beyond my own. It seems that fate has brought us together. I am ready to hear your words and learn from your experiences. My name is Barend, a 20-year-old Man from a small fishing village. Barend comes from a long line of fishermen, and since he was old enough to hold a net, he has been helping his father and grandfather with their catch. Barend loves the sea and the creatures that live in it, and dreams of one day becoming a great fisherman like his ancestors.

However, fate had different plans for Barend. One day, a group of Cannonist attacked the fishing village, burning down houses and killing many of the villagers, including Barend's father and grandfather. Barend and his mother barely escaped with their lives, and were taken in by a nearby town of refugees.

As they tried to rebuild their lives, the news came that more Cannonist  where coming, and that a great war was looming. The town's leaders decided to send their able-bodied men and women to join the army of the Duke, to defend their land and people.

Barend's mother begged the leaders to exempt her son from the draft, as he was too young and had already lost his father and grandfather to the war. But the leaders were desperate for soldiers, and eventually forced Barend to join the army, claiming that every able-bodied person was needed to fight for their survival.

Now Barend finds himself torn between his love for the sea and his duty as a soldier. He has never held a sword, let alone fought a battle, and he fears for his life and his mother's safety. But he also knows that he has to do his part to protect his people and honor his father's and grandfather's sacrifice.




"Oh, I just, uh…" you stutter, tensing up. You eye the crone, then back outside the tent. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…


Character Name: Barend Al-Assad
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Height: 5’4”. Weight: 167 Lbs. Hair Color: Brown Eye Color: Dark Gray. Body-type: Slim. He looks sad and lonely. His eyes are dark.
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

 

- Please remember to add dialogue of your character actions! This is to ensure we know what you are doing! 

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is Smol_Bean~#2377! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

- Please remember to add dialogue of your character actions! This is to ensure we know what you are doing! 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is Smol_bean~#2377! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI


Lastly is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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