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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    Discord: beete#8476
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming roughly outlines everything that takes place outside the actual game but influences the game itself.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergamer is the name given among roleplayers to a type of player who tries to make his player character as powerful as possible.
    Status: Denied

Hello, uh, I want to start a new life here mti my friends I want to, uh, achieve something. Thank you for your hospitality!

Character Name: Gesorad
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: He looks very nice, has black eyes, normal posture and he is 1.70m (I am european) tall and weighs 62kg.
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  • Unfortunately your application has been denied at this time. LotC is an English based server and while we encourage a wide variety of players to join us, it can sometimes be difficult for players who do not speak English fluently to integrate within the community. In addition:

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?

  • Your Character Biography is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!

  • Your Roleplay Definition and Experience must include your definition of roleplay!

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

  • Your Character Dislike is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's dislike connects with their biography!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @Mingo#2467 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!

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